Breathing's Just a Rhythm

This is a great idea!! I was planning something similar but I'm lazy af XDD

LETS GO!! TIME TRAVEL FOR THESE FOUR! THANK YOU, I LOVE TIME TRAVEL, CANT WAIT FOR MORE :pogchamp:

YEAHHHHHHH POGCHAMP

THIS LOOKS VERY POG BABES <3

Ooh intriguing!

YES MASS TIME TRAVEL AU SCHLATT REDEMPTION POGCHAMP PLEASE TELL ME TOMMY AND TUBBO WILL BE FRIENDS AGAIN ITS OK IF NOT BECUASE YOURE THE AUTHOR BUT PLEASE

I am HYPED

<333

ooo, wonder if any of them are ever gonna realise the others time travelled

ahsdjgk !!! this is so intriguing so far

LET'S GOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! You are an angel and a blessing and I NEEDED more of this dynamic!!!! And how will Dream react to Tommy being manipulated by someone else!?!?!?!? This is going to be an awesome story, I can feel it!!!Thank you for writing! Amazing chapter!!!!

POGGG I LIKE THIS

Very hyped!!! I love time travel plots LOL

And I’m sure as hell not complaining about your want to write insane Wilbur and good Schlatt.

I’m literally in love with this fic already :))

You wrote Wilbur’s mood changes so well... Just, the way he cares for Tommy but still hurts him because he’s thinks by doing it he’s actually protecting him? It really just gives me the exact vibes he gave off on the SMP, you’re writing him perfectly. Really excited to see how this goes. And if I read the tag right, I’m excited how a Wilbur redemption will play out! Looking forward to more, keep up the amazing work! <3

GOOD FOR YOU THIS FIC IS BRILLIANT

Bruhhhhh good Schlatt is a new one for me but I’m liking it

i absolutely love time travel fics and im so excited to see where you're going to go with this <3

LETSGOOOOO TIME TRAVEL POG !!!!!!

THIS IS GREAT EE

DADSCHLATT???? OH SHIT??????? POG???

laskdjflajs YES,, I am all here for time travel fics,, plus good Schlatt as well!! <3

Good Schlatt?, Oh my gosh, Thank you! (•͈w•͈)

I searched for this and i say yes i love this alreadyyyy AHH i scream owo this book is just too good

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOi ami ami honestly have no words my brain is just *angst found family time travel wilbur schlatt ahhhhhhh*i really wanted to come into the comments and write a long comment about how much i am enjoying this because if anything deserves a long comment, this deserves a long comment but my brain is just not functioninghopefully the sentiment carries!!! because i love this idea so much :Dill try again next chapter

GOOD SCHLATT GOOD SCHLATT

Well, I was hoping for a less insane Wilbur, but I’ll take the good Schlatt and maybe a rescue for Tommy

ooooo i’m vibing with this!!!

I just saw this come up on my email, thinking," Oh now there's 5 chapters" since I had just glanced at this and not checked anything. I look back and WHAT HOW ARE THERE 13 FREAKING CHAPTERS??/

YES FINALLY I LOVE THE IDEA OF SCHLATT GOING BACK BEFORE HE DIED FUCK YESpeople don't pay enough attention to schlatt i need my ram man content

good schlatt is appreciated

oooooh so did Tommy and Tuboo came back to same time?? Like Tommy is back in exile with Wilbur and Tubbo is back as vice president... I hope Tubbo can also help Quackity from Schlatt...

Oh this is off to a amazing start. I can't wait to see how this plans out.

I WANTED TO READ THIS AS SOON AS THE NOTIFICATION CAME OUT BUT MY GOD QUACKITY’S STREAM WAS AMAZING AAAAAAA I CAN’T WAIT TO READ THIS AND ALSO FOR HIS NEXT STREAM

Molly, my love, I just realized you write “breathing’s just a rhythm” AND “black bird fly”, my two favorite fics.I’m in love with you.

Time travel fics are pog, and well if anyone is gonna figure out that those “four” have traveled through time, would be Technoblade, my mans literally stuck with 50k + voices.

Waittttttttttttttttttt so then why did they timetravel. I read a fic once where Karl helped Tommy timetravel after Dream killed him but that ended with him revived going to eret after the betrayal when he became king

Aaaaaah stress

ok so i read this, ALL OF THIS, in one sitting. i was up till like 3 in the morning with my entire sense of reality fading away and all i could register was this amazing goddamn story playing out on my eReader. i can't even describe it. after finishing i immediately passed out, so i'm only commenting now. IT. IS. SO. GOOD.it's my first time seeing some quality techno whump, and i am in love. and i'm strangely fond of Chat in here, i love how they kinda have their own personality (personalities?), how they're trying to help but that's kinda hard when you're 20k different people. the way you showed tommy's abuse and trauma was so perfectly uncomfortable, it made me feel his terror of dream and conflict over wilbur. oh yeah speaking of dream and wilbur, they're PERFECT!! Wil's insanity and dream's pure diabolical villainy. i read their tv tropes page recently and Dream is the textbook definition of a manipulative bastard and it shows, so good... so good...DADSCHLATT!!!! i've never seen good dadschlatt before and BOIIIIII DAD OF THE YEAR!!! his change in character feels so damn natural here i can't believe i've adopted him as father figure this quickly. and phil too, his unintentional neglect of wil and tommy was heartbreaking but i can realistically see how that came to be. THOSE FLASHBACK CHAPTERS!!!! i love their backstory here so much, how you let us watch the family splinter and fall apart to what we have now. then when wil killed techno and he was just so damn confused about what to feel THIS ANGST THIS PAIN IS JUST RIGHT!!! ugh my brain isn't functioning right, i can't form thoughts. Fic good, me sub, gonna reread

excellent

<3

GOOD SCHLATT POG

yo this is too lit thoo

A TIME TRAVEL FIXING FIC PLEASE I NEVER KNEW I NEDDED BUT BOY DO I LOVE IT. I really wanna see a good side to schlatt, because I want for there to be at least some good parents in this world (except for maybe Sam but that got screwed over)

It’s not finished but I’m still rereading cause this story is so great! I love how you write the characters! No spoilers for new readers but ugh I love it so much!

yay good schlatt! :Dno bad wilbur! D:

omg omg

Shlatt as a decent man is not a thing I see very often and I'm extremely grateful to see it again