WAIT I JUST REALISED, COULD THE NEW TWO CHARACTERS BE RANBOO AND SAM?
hahahhhh oh this is a mistake --i know jack all about season 2, what am i doing...
THIS IS SUCH AN INTERESTING IDEA??? HOLY SHIT I LOVE IT SO MUCH. i've already felt at least 6 different emotions from this alone and just aaa i am looking forward to the rest!!
THIS IS SO FUCKING COOL MAN WTF
YOO THIS CHAPTER IS SO POG!! Really excited if you update this! Tubbo and Tommy from the future changing the timeline ey? Is Dream a mentor or an abuser? What happened? I really want to read their backstory. Anyways no pressure and nice chapter!
ANON I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, TIME TRAVEL FICS ARE MY LIFE AND IVE BEEN WANTING TO SEE TOMMY OR TUBBO TRAVEL BACK TO THE PAST TO CHANGE IT SO, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH ANON JENADJWNNSBD ššš
Hope to hear more from this story ^Ļ^
AAAAAH I HAD THOUGHT OF SOMETHING SIMILAR AND IāM SO GLAD THIS FIC EXISTS ITāS SO GOOD!!
This is definitly the kind of itch i want. If you feel unmotivated, then i
BAMFTOMMY AND DREAM TEAM UP FUCKIN POG AS HELL BROThe potential of that team up is unparalleled and ik in canon itās toxic as fuck I have to admit Tommy going āfuck itā and growing into himself without people telling him to shut up is something I LIVE for.
Dj Fkrknsufosks YES PLEASE, LOVE THIS
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH-THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING IDEAI'm looking forward to how this'll play out!!!
HOLLYY SHIITT FINALLY FOUND A TIME TRAVEL FIC OF DREAM SMP OMG THANK U FOR THISSSS POGGGGGG
BUCKLE IN BITCHES WE'RE GOING TO TIME TRAVEL. HELLO??? TOMMY REMINDING PEOPLE OF DREAM??? WTF HAPPENED LMAOO I'M FREAKING OUT BUT IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE
God a while ago I had a faint sliver of an idea. āWhat if the protege au got mixed in with time-travel. How would that work? What could I potentially do with that?ā I was a cool idea, but I couldnāt really figure out how on earth I would execute it without messing the whole thing up. This. This story is exactly what I imagined if someone were to combine the two ideas and man did you do it perfectly. Thereās a layer mystery behind the from-the-future duo and the story has an actual plot and not just a one-shot scenario, which I really appreciate. Everything is great and I love it so much. The characters especially. The character portrayal of everyone is on point and really works. I also especially love the future duo. Tubbo/Toby is much bolder and more confident than his younger self, but still has aura of nervousness and compassion. He still feels like Tubbo, just older and with more responsibility.Tommy/Theo on the other hand is a very different person then his counterpart. Which makes sense. I currently donāt know how you have written the timeline, but if I had to guess, Wilbur and Tommy spend at least 2 years exiled together before the War for LāManberg. And after that Tommy was in exile for how many years before he officially joined Dream. During both times exiled, Tommy was abused horrendously, first by Wilbur, then Dream. Itās no wonder that he is so different. But Tommy is stubborn. And because Toby and Theo showed up right before things really went to shit, all the things that turned Tommy into Theo never will happen. So I think that Tommy is really going to resent Theo and promise to never be him. And thereās strong chance that he wonāt. Anyway, I think thatās all I got. Iām really looking forward to see what you have in store for us next. Again, amazing story. Keep it up!!! <3333
THE ITCH HAS BEEN SCRATCHED!!! Well count me in on this adventure. Time travel fics/aus are my vice when it comes to fandoms, and I hadnt found one that scratches the itch yet in this one, to the point where I am almost writing drabbles for myself about it. Thisāll be fun! I am invested now
pog pog pog the relationships in the future look like an absolute mess heh. also jesus theo is dream really the best person to be seeking out (no. the answer is no.)also if youre fixing up any errors its spelled Schlatt, not Shlatt
Hey, this is really well written and the dialogue is very fitting for the characters! But, I just wanted to let you know that Tubbo doesnāt like people using his real name online. Heās fine with people knowing it, but not using it, so maybe you could change it to something else like you did with Tommy? Thanks š
bro this looks so cool like holy-
I am so damn interested in this concept, oh my god. I love flash forward āwhat happenedā future stories like this. I also love past versions of characters reacting badly to how theyāve changed, too... Iām an angsty wreck, huh.
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This is really cool!! But also Tubbo has said he isnāt comfortable with people using his real name, maybe you could change it?
Time to start binge reading instead of sleeping
I will probably cry reading this fic ācause in any fic where clingyduo fights I get sad
Found this through fanart of it on tumblr, I love it already and I canāt wait to read it! <3
what an interesting itch it is
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HOLY- THIS AU IS AMAZING š
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YO HOLY SHIT WHAT
Iād really love to know what the technoblade fic is called
I really like Ghostburs character in this story! In canon we see him as a character with no memoryās of his bad actions, with him not having to take any responsibility for said actions either (which low-key annoyed me tbh), but here we have a Ghostbur whoās definitely visibly off the rails, having regained memories of his actions, and others being wary and trying to calm his actions while not only keeping an eye out and supporting Wilbur himself. Also Schlatts characters really cool too, seein him show regret for what his future self did is really nice to see! God I love this fic!!
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OH GOD IM WATCHING TOMMYS AMONG US STREAM WITH THE SIDEMEN RN AND HE WAS WATCHING A VIDEO HE FOUND THAT WAS JOKINGLY STARTING DRAMA WITH HIM AND IN THE VIDEO THERE WAS FANART FOR THIS FIC AKEJDJDJJDJDHDGDDG
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Wait what technoblade time travel fic-?
Wait so does Tommyās Exile turn into a sort of apprenticeship in this au? Pog, love the concept
YOOOOO THIS IS SO COOL IM HOOKED ALREADY
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wait this is so cool
Firstly, I love this concept plus it's well written, wow. Secondly, what was the other fix-it time travel fic with techno you made allusion to in the beginning? Im curious now ;-;
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I read the description of the story and instantly realized how similar it was to the fanfic I'm writing! Tommy and Tubbo time travel back to the election? Me too! There's a couple of differences and I just started mine recently but I swear I didn't know this existed! I haven't read the entire thing yet but it looks interesting and the beginning is just so close with mine that it's both cool and terrifying!
i haven't started reading yet, wish i had the time, but i saw the word count and? mwah. amazing, showstopping, fantastic. I've been looking for a good long fic and i think this is gonna be the one
tommyinnits full name is tomathy confirmed??? sjgjzjfjsin all seriousness i adore this idea and im super excited to read! time travel is dope and older clingy boys seem really cool
que buen libro ES LO MEJORRR QUE E LEIDO
AHHH I love this so much, i hope you dont mind but i drew a little design for theo, hopefully you like it! I rushed it put a lil bit but i did my best lmao, KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!https://twitter.com/acecoldq/status/1377142216917798920?s=21
The fact that Theo is so submissive to Dream hurts me really bad ;-;
Well! Rereading this! I know thereās an update cause my art just got a shitton of likes (thanks by the way) but I am commited. I love how you used the strike throughs for thoughts the characters tried to push out of their mind. Also Toby and Theo are the best from word go lol.No specific art for this chapter but I do give you a Theo because heās the best: https://proudfreakmetarusonniku.tumblr.com/post/648006455073619968/theo-my-beloved
A friend to save....Is Ranboo trapped in the end?
i cant wait to read this (and itās gonna take forever to do so but not complaining) omfggg
I'm a dozen chapters in and i honestly can't continue, i usually can read stories with abuse in it only if i know that the abuser is punished or if they face the consequences of their action, but here the story doesn't do that, quite the opposite in fact, here the story seems to excuse, forgive or even condone the abuser actions, and the fact that future tommy's stockholm syndrome is being enabled and fueled constantly is just horrifting.