Too good to be true

Please do continue. Lesbian ageplay/TPE fics (that are worth reading) are so hard to come by. Two that I recall reading are "Mothering Karen" by Toucamingo on Literotica, and "At Her Feet" by Rebekah Weatherspoon. Something that I have yet to see explored or mentioned in fics such as these is the reason that women like Joan desire and seek out such relationships - what exactly are they looking for, aside from sex, if that. I'm also curious about the roundabout, dubiously consensual way Joan chose to seek out potential partners. Why not fish in kink communities like FetLife? As for what I'm hoping to see: porn with feels. Deep kissing, motherly body contact, reassurances and assuage of fears and insecurities, some resistance or internal conflict but eventual submission to and expressed need for Joan's authority from Madison. I'm hoping that despite Joan's incredibly predatory and manipulative ways, there's genuine affection for Madison. Btw, is Joan the possessive/jealous type? And what DOES she do for a living? ;)

Please update!

Please add another chapter

Oh this is great, please update this?

pls update

Oh this is just lovely.

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I miss this story so much, it was taking such an intersting turn, its hard to come by good lesbian stories, especially the mdlg content

I love this story! Thank you for writing! Do you think you will ever pick this story back up?

I love a little dc, gaslighting, and humiliation. Why can’t I find more stories like this one?

I keep forgetting about this fiction find it again and become in love with it all over again

Absolutely love this fic and eagerly await any updates

I have read this so many times even though it's unfinished. what is there is so good I just have to reread over and over. it's up there with the greats like breaking the girl for sure. If you ever update again I will eagerly read but even if you don't I will still come back.

I am LOVING this so far!!

really great start!

Hi! I’m a beta reader and I’m available if you need a beta reader for your works!

What I love the most about this story is all the little details and stuff, like, in my first reading I took a lot of Joans actions at face value, but after a few readings I notice how manipulative she is and notice stuff I didn't before, I can even speculate why she and her previous girlfriend broke up

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Oh man, Joan, you sneaky woman!!!!!!!! I love it.

So brilliant! The way that Joan is going about the situation. It's more on the realistic end and I'm eating it all up.

I love this. I love it so much. ONTO CHAPTER 3

Ohhh I don’t know how I feel about that sneaky sneaky sneaking around Miss Joan is doing...

I’m already hooked! AhHh

oh boy.

Getting some " You" vibes

My heat aghhhh it’s so precious

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There aren't very md\lg stories out there. I think one would be awesome.

Liking this :) I like how you've taken some time to set it all up. Personally I'd prefer more of an md/lg kind of thing, but it's up to you. Thanks for writing.

I love the path that you're going!!! You are developing the story very well, and I really like the slow build. Personally, I really like what you have going with Joan introducing Madison to little kid things subconciously. I think you should do it all the way to infantilism. Perhaps, maybe she wets the bed one night and Joan suggests she wears pull ups, but then Madison starts having them during the day and she'll eventually need diapers. I really like where this is going though! You are a great writer!

So far so good, and I'd like to see MD/LG, haha

Keep up with the good work!

I absolutely love it. And personally I'd love some forced regression.

Yassssss omg I love this so much

Uuuh so good. Last scene was delicious.

..it's always good to discover something new...:)(?)

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Cool story. Update soon :p

Love it! Very hot

This is so good i'm gonna rip my hair out

Madison is more attentive than me, my dumbass autistic self would have been "oh you cut the crusts off? Thank you!" and eaten it because goat cheese and grilled veggies sounds disgusting

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I love this so fucking much!!!!!!!!!!!!

Update soon. Cool story! I'm enjoying it :p

I'm screeeaaaammiinngggg!!! Soo good! I am such a sucker for lactation. Oh wow i could read this all day. I really love the transition in Joan and Maddy's relationship. I can't wait until she becomes more comfortable with Joan. Breast feeding is such a beautiful bonding experience. I love all the little deatails too. Like the bath and body gift basket. And the cartoons with parental advisory. I love the kiddy meals and (even though it's kinda wrong) i love how Joan's manipulating Madison. She's like putty in Joan's hands and i just love how you're going about this story in general. Need more works and writers like this.

This is gold <3 i wish i could leave more kudos

More please!!! I love this story!

Okay, I am (guiltily) loving this and hoping you update soon.

Will you ever update? Please do! It's cool story :p

Omg This was amazing. I can't wait to read more and the last chapter was so hot.