oh this is a sick idea man, the good omens fan in me is living for it. And your phil characterization was really neat! Interested to see how you make wilbur and tommy "monsterous" as well since they dont have like a common fanon design that fits that unlike techno.
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YEAAAAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!! phil said damn free kids huh ?
Oh my god he’s saving the world by being a good dad i-
Oh i am living for this. I cannot wait to see where this goes.
So from what I'm gathering Phil is try to change it from "The Final Count Down" to *off-key kazoo*
Great writing! I'm excited to read more!
This is amazing, Great Job! Cant wait to read more!
SHAKES SO VIOLENTLY UR WRITING STYLE IS WICKED AND I LOVE IT
This fic in a nutshell: Dadza punches fate in the face by being the best parent possibleThe return of N i c k Dang you do write a lot of stories wow- It is my food source so i dont mind ^v^ :D
oh I absolutely LOVE this just based on the first chapter! really giving me a similar feeling to good omens although idk if it has any influence from that? really excited to see where this goes!
👀👀👀👀I am VERY interested in where this is going!!!
DUDE!!!!! this looks fucking awesome so far! Cant wait to see what happens next! (:
Philza be seein’ Destruction Incarnate and just goes: “baby boy. baby.” and “I could make a Family out of this.” and that’s very cool of him. very much Pog!! Can’t wait for more!! I shall be lurking!!
ooooo this seems pretty cool!!
“ If they’re left to grow, the world as everyone knows it, it’ll fall into nothing but chaos.” And that’s the key word isn’t it, *left* to grow .... sorry if that sounds weird it’s just what my brain said as soon as it read that line
yooooo!!!!! this is so cool!!!! I'm in love with this concept omgalso!! your writing!!! it's so good my dude this is fucking great and so are all of your works
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ooooooooo
OHHHHHIHOHOHOHOH THEMMMMMMM OH MY GODDDD
bro pog!!!! this is so fucking sick dude ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I’m really liking the way you write these characters, can’t wait to see where it goes from here!
everyone: let's kill a couple of kids and save the world!phil: haha, no <3
Ooooh I love this idea, I'm imagining Phil being captured or injured and then his sons go bonkers in retaliation
this fic is my favorite thing ever
This is adorable, I love the way you write this story! Tiny Technoblade and fatherly Phil have my heart❤ Kudos, well done!
Ack I love this fanfic!!!Lots of love and hopefully some motivation to you!!!Have a good day/evening/night!!
Don’t mind me rereading this for the 18th time
HELLO I AM VERY EXCITED FOR THIS
oh my godddddddddddddddd they were roooooooooooomaaaaaaaaates
Can't wait for the ride this is going to be!
Hey I really love your fic so far! I tend to comment only on the latest chapter of a fic, but I noticed a typo: you wrote "unsettling apparences" instead of "appearances". Byeeee onto the next chapter! .o/
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Ooh very intriguing
Good Omens brain going brrrr rn I dig the concept! Super excited to read more! >:]
I usually don't read these kind of stories but the premise is so intriguing you have my attention.
Yoooooo I love your work! And I can't wait to read more!
I know logically Tommy is probably just going to be a regular human or hybrid, but in my heart, I'm secretly hoping for him to defy the odds and be an avian
Oh I am SO hyped to read this :D
Haven't even started reading yet I just wanted to say that the plot summary is what Reginald Hargreeves wanted to do but did completely wrong in Umbrella Academy. I'm just saying.
im so hooked. i love the writing and plot already. this si gonna be dope
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I found this through the MCYT discord and I love it! Baby Techno and Wilbur are absolutely adorable, and I cannot wait until Phil brings back their gremlin brother!
SIRCANTUS. you are no longer allowed to write fanfiction, for the sole purpose that you are too good at it and you need to give the others a chance /lh but srsly like... i am so invested on the first dam chapter. p a y n e
SO CUTE I WILL BE BRAINROTTING ON THIS FOR DAYS
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I like this concept a lot! Good dad phil for the win!!
"Lucas says, face going dark. “Monsters specifically born to destroy and hurt. But not mindless, like the night ones. More like…” He trails off, eyes flicking to Phil. "Hahahahahah I hate Lucas and want him to burn his tongue on his soup forever afterwards.
