The Last Heist

omggg this is so good :0 i’m hooked already lol

YEESSSSSSSS YEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS MMMMMMMMMMM DIRTY CRIME BOY FOUND FAMILY POG

Yo, this is great so far! Excellent world building, and great descriptions :) Can’t wait to see where you go next with it!

YES THIS IS A W E S O M Ei'm down to help out with beta duties if you're looking, but honestly, you aren't in dire need of one (imo). this was such a smooth read!also the plot is just- *chef's kiss* Fucking Amazing and Very PogChamp™overall, this is a brilliant first chapter. probably one of the best i've come across :)

HOLY SHIT! This is such a good first chapter! Like, dude, I haven't read any further than this first chapter--but I will be binge reading this immediately after I hit the comment button--but this is so exciting and world-building and immediate care for Tommy's well-being because we're already cheering for his survival and just, geez! This is amazing writing!

this is an amazing fic!

BOY DO I LOVE DYSTOPIA-STYLE SHIT. This is so good, immediate kudos.

this is the most captivating thing i have ever read

Saw some art for this on tumblr, clicked the link, and was already hooked just reading the tags. Mwah mwah mwah. Chapter one and this is already one of my favorite fics!!!!

SUCH A GOOD OPENING AWOOGA IM PUMPED

let me just tell you, I haven't read this yet (I will), but one of the major reasons I clicked on this fic is you know whyI see what you did there and I really love and appreciate ithehe 69 hehehe 420

RIP WORDCOUNT YOU WILL BE MISSED

YESYESYESYESYEYSESYEYESYEYESYEYSYSYESYEHYSYS

Amazing writing!!

If Sam wasn’t taken by Dream I’ll eat my shoes

MY JAW DROPPED

Oh my goodness first chapter and I'm already hooked

never have i ever got so on edge of my seat reading an escaping scene that i know the outcome of wow just damn that was so cool i am so invested :Dthanks for the chapter <3

THIS FIC SOUNDS SO COOL SO FAR OH MY GOD I AM VERY EXCITED FOR THIS :OOOOit's been on my list for awhile now but i finally stopped procrastinatingit do be a long boi tho :0 /posi love long fics hehehehehtommy is so <33he is just so greati love hecan't wait to read more :0

Daaaaaamn :D

Oeh! Srrong opening chapter!I have not read a more science fiction setting so im very intrigued to start this!I am a bit late to party sadly. At this point, 29/40 have been posted. Lets see if i can catch up in time. (150.000 words jusus christ)

Heyo- I don’t know if you take requests, but if you do, can you make an SBI fic where all of SBI except for Tommy are top superheros? And so even though they're family, Tommy doesn't see them often. So- Tommy's plan to make them spend more time together is to become the city's new supervillian. Shenanigans ensues :DI live for secret double lives skdjjsssdj

This is probably my favorite fic out there and I’m so excited to reread it! Thank you so fucking much for writing this masterpiece

Me: I can't wait to read this!Chapter first sentence: Tommy was going to dieMe: (;;;・_・) um.. ====> (• ▽ •;) This is finneee

I love this book so much, words cannot explain it. I honestly really want Tommy to say no and be like a badass since Wilbur is really pissing me off

honestly SUCH a good first chapter. the last sentence actually had me giggling and kicking my feet LETS GO. tommy is a badass and the idea of the underground makes me wanna cry i love it so much.

Yooooo this is so interesting

Yo first chapter and I can tell this is gonna be a good one

i had forgotten how good this starts TIME TO REREAD. that last line AGH goosebumps <3333

This is such a cool concept!Awesome chapter + writing <3

Incredible piece!The characters definition and development are beautifully written!Very cool! Love Weathered Gremlin Tommy :)

It’s reread time 😎

The writing is impeccable, holy shit :0

AYYY BIG Q

Awwww Big Q feel for the puppy eyes lol

ooh i love this sm and i love the way you incorporate the canon bits into the au :))

I laughed so hard when Tommy was making up a story on being "the owner's friend" only to be interrupted by Quackity saying he's the owner.

HOLY SHIT QUACKITY MY BELOVED OH MY GOD

awww Tommy charmed him

My work building needs are satisfied. Thank you

Aww yess some Big Q to sooth the soul

I love casino!Quackity

casino!quackity is just *chef kiss*FRIENDSHIP!!!

I loved the Tommy and Quackity intereraction <3

Awww I love this interaction so much, and I think you did pretty well with the dialogue

Big Q is gonna be the gentle (but badass and terrifying) crime uncle and I live for it

Fantastic writing!!

Even if you hate dialog I must say you have a talent for it

I’m in love with this already

Now they're besties