lover not a fighter, but i'll fight for what i love

This is the most perfect start to a story I've ever read. This concept, the chapter's development of Jungkook... Wow I'm speechless. I love this so much oh my god

Correct me if I'm wrong but is the title from the song "ain't nobody taking my baby"?

Correct me if I'm wrong but is the title from the song "ain't nobody taking my baby"? I love your story so far btw. Especially how you have portrayed each character, as well as the build with Jungkook :).

I really don't think it's okay To write this kind of fic like some of you are fucked up. Like I don't know how To explain but writting stuff with someone acting like a child and making this person in a romantic relathionship is not okay at all!!! And it's so cliche and all the writting is really not good. I should have read the tags before anyway just don't write this kind of things complety fucked up

Holy shit this idea of your is so creative! never have i seen a mafia fic like this before, what with jungkook being an adorable baby (usually he's a sadistic hitman smh). Kookie is adorable and this is gonna be awesome I just know it! Thank you so much for your creative writing!

For those of you who are reading the comments, let me tell you, this story is downright AMAZING. So get yo ass to start reading, it gets better and better ♡

why...are there like..five million tags for this fic?with most of them literally meaning the same thing?just...why?

Mafia stuff + Taekook + childish kook? BITCH? Am I living a dream?

I WILL GIVE YOU..... MY LOVE !___! (^~^) [

HOLY HECK I LOVE THIS I READ ALL 45 CHAPTERS IN 5 HOURS AND IM ADDICTED PLS TELL ME UR FINISHING IT AT FIRST I WASNT TOO FOND OF THE LITTLE JK BUT THE WAY YOU DEVELOPED THE PLOT AND CHARACTERS MADE IT SO ADDICTING AND INTERESTING TO READ AND FOR THAT I APPLAUD YOU AND WISH THAT THERES AN UPDATE SOON!!

First of all (omg I've never left a comment on any story i think???) I REALLY LOVE THIS. I didn't think I'd grow so attached to these characters but HERE WE ARE. I'm currently starting to re-read the story, your writing totally has me totally hooked. Secondly, I've come back to the first chapter to look for clues on Taekook's haircolours (yes) - of course purely for scientific purposes, not aT aLL because I REALLY have the urge to draw fanart since I'm not only a fanfiction addict, but also an artist (wow). Kookie has chestnut brown hair, but you gotta help me with Tae ^^ pink highlights sound really interesting to draw, but what's... like, his "base colour"? (And sorry if I missed it in the story omg) Thank you for supporting my... art... kinda :D & thanks for giving birth to this masterpiece of a story. See Ya

Thanks for updating!

ooooo this sounds so good. I was a little worried about that whole jungkook situation at first, from reading the tags but this actually sounds very promising o-o im excited for more and probably gonna binge read this lool

im so excited for this book!! absolutely loved the start!

First I want to say that your story is AMAZING. I wanted to ask you for permission to translate (English-->Bulgarian) your story on wattpad, with credit of course. (im sorry for my grammar)

I absolutely adore this story so much!! Thank you so much!!!! I will never get tired of reading this l. Their relationship is so pure! I'm in love with their love

Oooo im so in for lil koo :(((

Reading this series for the 4th time. I love it so muchI wish ppl wrote more concepts like this 😔💚 u r crazy talented!!

Jesus Christ, I've never read anything like this, with this kind of subject matter, I'm very excited. I begin my journey through this reading. Greetings, writer. ❣️

I’ve reread this story so many times but I’ve never finished it because I don’t want it to end :( I’m planning on rereading it again and finally finishing it! It really is one of my favorite stories on here!!!

I'm already in love with the first chapter. Can't wait to read all of it soon 🥺💞

uh skksksksskksksskksksks

OHOHOHO inch a resting

I'm new to this type of fan-fic, but it seems interesting so I'll give it a try!:)

Hey 👋 I want to start reading this story ASAP but I am still a bit not sure with some tags 😅 so can please you please tell me JK’s age 🥺🥺 it’s a bit sensitive topic for me so if you can please 🥺 And I totally respect you and your work nothing against it , it’s just I am like that 😅 And I’ll totally understand if you won’t tell me the age 💜 Thankyou 😊😊

This is so hooking me up 🥺I'm starting to love this already

last line is coming from taylor swift, blank space LOL

Man never been offended by a line soo much for no reason, but hey I was good baby, the one who let my parents also sleep like babies, the peacemaker between brothers, babysat them at 5 cus mom trusted me enough to do so, obedient, did chores around the house since 3, never got in trouble, sooo.....yeah. "Girls specifically tended to be bratty" Cus uk this was the role of my brothers.

Oh this is going to be fun!!!

im back years later to reread this gem. I'm so excited to get back into it

You already have me hooked!!! Excited to see how the story unfolds!! 💖💖

Lovely ❤️

Interesting 🤔

Not my cup of tea :)

OH BOY FOUNF A NEW FAVORITE FIC

THIS FIC HAS MY HEART AND SOUL! MY WEAK ASS CANT CANT WAIT TO TURN TO A PUDDLE OF GOO WHILE READING MORE CUTE KOOKIE❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

AKCDIJDKFLALSJDLCKCNFNLSLCNCJKLSLSLFNN!!!!!I'm usually a lot more coherent and eloquent than this but I'm afraid that I have been reduced to a spazzy, squealy, giggly pile of fangirl (woman?) putty, if there is such a thing. But then I guess there is now because that is EXACTLY what I am at the moment. You have no idea how many times I had to put my phone down just so I could roll around in bed and muffle my squeals into my pillow. I should really be asleep because WORK but like the upstanding citizen and responsible adult that I'm NOT, I have no ounce of regret and am in fact infinitely glad that I decided to check ao3 for anything new in the Bottom!Kook tag and now here we are. I'd even go as far as to say that this might be one of the best decisions I've made so far this year because I can already tell that I'd fall head over 5-inch stilettos for this fic. I actually already am for your characterization of Jungkook. He is literally the most precious darling babydoll ever and I enjoyed picturing him doing and saying and wearing everything you have described. <3 I see him as a subby baby bottom irl as well and I refuse to believe otherwise, but in here it's like his cuteness and adorableness and loveliness factor was cranked up the to the absolute maximun and I AM SO HERE FOR IT!!! And this is only the second chapter!! How much worse am I gonna get?? Ugh. I both love and hate you for doing this. Please don't stop. Before I go, can I just say that I cackled like a madwoman at the part where Jin sort of implied that he killed Jungkook's previous bodyguards?? No one hurts my baby like they did and gets out of it alive. I hope Taehyung showers him with all the love and care and attention and appreciation he has never received. And I know he will because this is Taehyung we're talking about and he's already so WHIPPED. IT'S ONLY THE SECOND CHAPTEEERRR!! LMAO I SHOULD PROBABLY FEEL BAD FOR THE GUY.Anyway, I really do need to go now but not before letting you know that you did a fantastic job on this one, and I'm truly looking forward to the next chapters. I'M QUIVERING WITH EXCITEMENT TO SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING. ALL THE SEXINESS AND FLUFFINESS AND EVERYTHING IN BETWEEN. GIVE IT ALL TO MAMA.Thank you for writing this and I hope you stay inspired. I'll do my best to drop another comment on the next one, if you don't mind reading another stupidly lengthy piece of mindless mind vomit lololol!! xxxx

Wowowowowow this is so good I like it already

Oh no these fics arent good for my soft sensitive heart ;;^;;I m a puddle hELP

*slams 840392103739483x kudos button*

aaaaaa this is so cute and soft and oh god ggukie is so adorable here!!! where can i get a gguk too ;u;

I love it

I LET OUT THE LONGEST "AWWWWWW" WHEN I WAS READING THIS IS AMAZING THANK YOU

I am so in love with this story! It's really cute and it's my new favorite fanfic!!

Okay, first of all WHY AM I JUST READING THIS FIC ?? The concept is crazy fresh !! It's sexy silly and lovely at the same time !! Such a great fic !! Hwaiting xx

I love how Tae explained (instead of taking advantage of him) that what Jungkook did with the other bodyguards was wrong and I thought the poor thing was abt to cry but tae comforted him and told him it was ok and those jerks were wrong to do that and I’m sitting here just like adhdjkdkdkf tae is the best bodyguard in the world omgTaes so whipped im so whipped good god

omg i haven't finished reading the chapter yet but JUNGKOOK IN A SKIRT THANK YOU GOD BLESS YOU and the beginning is so fluffy its so cute its amazing i just want to tell u its amazing thank u thank u

i finished reading this chapter and its so so cute thank you for this tooth-rotting fluff omg, tae is the sweetest as he explains relationships to kook

I LOVE THIS FIC SOOOO MUCHHHHH NEVER STOP

I do t think I’ve ever subscribed to a story so fast in my life ahah this is SO UNIQUE