that's, like, a hundred miles

Oh god this is so good- The concept, the way it’s written. Please I need the next chapter this is amazing

why does this feel so goddamn familiar? OH WAIT BECAUSE THERE IS ACTUAL MANIPULATION AND GASLIGHTING. Personally, this kinda hits really close to home, the constant rules being changed and such, the hiding that is so incredibly accurate. I am not going to go too deep into it, but as someone who lives in really strict housing, the burner phone, the money, and the thinking is just so amazing. I am at a loss for words for how amazing this writing is. I can physically feel Tommy's emotions after being heartbroken, and doing the best you possibly can for it to only shatter because it did not follow expectations. This. Is. Amazing. I am sorry if this comes out as pushy or disrespectful but I am damn near vibrating at the thought of Tommy being removed from his toxic situation and how he might think continuing forward. You really amazed me with the accuracy, maybe I am attaching myself to someone's writing style/character, but damn this is truly amazing. Have a great night/evening/morning. :)

Wow! I love this idea! Kudos for u!

“He’d emailed Phil about it once, when he’d first moved with Dream. He’d never gotten a response“This honestly just really broke me. I can kind of understand Phil and Techno not feeling ready or up for it to take care of a 10 year old after Wilbur’s death (now that I’m thinking about it it’s still kind of shitty especially since Tommy was so close to Wilbur and after his death the rest of his family just abandoned him), but the fact that they didn’t even bother to stay in contact with him. Why was it so easy for them to forget about Tommy? How can one even do that to their own family member? And when Tommy was in a abusive household and decided to contact Phil about it ( which is a really brave and strong thing to do especially for a child), Phil never even bothered to read it. Sorry I’m ranting rn but it hits close to home lol. The fact you were able to make me feel anger, sadness, and dread so strongly really shows how good you are at writing! This is seriously amazing and it is a accurate portrayal of what child abuse can look like and how it can affect the victim. And how unfair the situation is. It’s so awful and stressful. Especially when it feels like the rest of your family just doesn’t care. I hope Tommy gets out of that abusive situation and Techno and Phil get your shit together and help the poor boy!!

Hurt sleepy bois pog? Hurt sleepy bois pog!

dude this is great keep it up!

This is amazing Emotions, the overall writing style - I love this

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Я требую проды!

nO you can’t end it like that D:this is literally going to haunt my thoughts until it updates oh god. i got really freaking invested while reading

I need more modern time RaccoonInnit stories, they’re officially my favorites.

Omg this is soooooo good. I need more pls update soon. Also why do I have the feeling Tommy will hide and Live on the street. The Dream, Techno and Phil piss me off in the story. Poor Tommy doesn’t deserves that.❤️

OKG THIS IS SO GOOD I CANT WAIT FIR ANOTHER CUAPTER IM SO EXCITED (Take ur time tho ur mental health is more important) AKENFJSJ

Here for this, so good.

When you’re done with your other projects, I would highly encourage you to return to this one, if you feel up to it haha. It’s very good, I’m super invested. I’ll be taking a look at your other work too, I love your writingKudos!

Great story! I really enjoyed all of it! I can’t wait till the next chapter! (Sorry for their not being more words in the comment sleepy)

THIS IS SO GOOD !!I saw the references with the actual dsmp and I fell in love.Your writing is just spectacular as well and the plot and storyline goes so well together!I cant wait for the next chapter hdhsekbrdnsj

You just love to break my heart huh?

I really want to continue. I really like what you write!

Theseus is the perfect middle name for Tommy! 😂

NONONONO DO NOT CALL DREAM N O

Hnwngngngn the desk bit was great!!!!

AHHHH HELLO I AM WRITING THIS BEOFRE I READ THIS CHAPTER: super hyped, you’re working so fast lol!! This is my favorite fic at the moment so it’s always great to see the notification haha. Ok I’m gonna go read now and I’ll be back lmfaoEdit: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OK WE GOT SOME SELF AWARENESS HAPPENING NOW, LETS GOOOOO. Dream is so FUCKED bro, what is his motive? Maybe it’s just a power thing, idk, but damn he is ruthless. I’m glad Tommy is finally realizing that this isn’t normal. I’m super apprehensive and scared for his plan tho lol. Man I am THEORIZING. It’s playing out in my head and I’m so scared HHHHH I can’t wait to see what happens next!!Really loving everything you’ve done, this is by far my favorite fic right now!!Kudos!

hey can i rec this fic on my sbi fanfic recs twitter? and if so do you have a twitter you'd like me to link to?

techno u fuck also u should have seen my face when i read the wilbur being dead line jesus christbrilliant writing and concept :0

Stop, I will cry. I am crying, this has really been a joy to watch evolve, and I don’t think I’ve so eagerly awaited new chapters for a story in quite a while. This was fantastic!

oh god this is the perfect version of the dsmp exile escape plot but irl it all fits so well

This is on another level of angst. No I'm not crying I'm just sweating with my eyesAmazing work <3333

ayup! this made me cryfr ur such a good writer :')) great story

This whole story is exactly the Exile arc and what happened when Tommy ran to Techno's home but put in a different perspective and I absolutely fucking love this I love the way everything is written god this is so angstyAnd I really like Tommy's name! Theseus as a middle name is poggersbut I came here for my food I am happy thank you for writing!

WAIT WHY IS THAT WHERE IT ENDS AAAAAA

Dude, this fic is seriously amazing. This was the first book I’ve read in awhile where I didn’t want to put it down because I wanted to figure out what happened next. I loved it so much that I made some fanart of it for a playlist cover on spotify. I gathered some songs that made me angsty about this fic and its called the same name of your fic. Thanks so much for creating something so amazing.

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TECHNO, DON'T YOU DARE CALL THAT GREEN BASTARD!!! >:C

I can’t explain how much I love this fanfic...

i hate to be one of those people to say it hit close to home but damn, if tommy can do that so can i.BUT SRSLY MMMMMMMMM I FOUND THIS FROM FANART ON INSTA AND I AM SOBBING MY EYES OUT, your writing is so nice and i dnfhfmjsbfmsjdbdbfmsjddndjsndfbsbdjwoeoehfbcnsbdbsb this is amazing,,also the recreation of tommy sneaking out of exile dhmu :sob: /pos

Hello! I’m not sure of any other way to contact you but I thought this fanfic was AMAZING and I’d love to maybe make a printable version of it but I wanted to ask your permission:) it won’t be sold for money and you’ll have full credit for your amazing work if you have questions you can contact me here (discord puffy#6578)

Techno really should have taken a picture of the state Tommy was in. I feel like that'd help with legal stuff

DONT CALL DREAM YA PRICK

I read the first paragraph or so and instantly knew I was going to cry. this is really so well written but mannn you are pulling on all of my emotions

first chapter and ive teared up at one part already. good job, this is very epic so far :D

Did you get tears outta me in the first chapter? yeswill i be continuing? also yes- WILBUR

I know the feeling of Tommy when the photo was broken. I have one of my cousins I haven’t seen in 4 years that I always keep with me. Sentimental value😎

Well, Techno thinks that Tommy hates him, so I'm holding out a shred of hope that there's been a horrible miscommunication, but right now it does not look good!

Technoblade Watson if you call Dream I am personally sending you to g o d. Technoblade never dies, more like Technoblade hasn’t died yet

the feminine urge to read this fic for the 6th time was too strong 😔👊

NO TECHNO YOU FUCKING IDIOT

This is SO painful to read. But based on this chapter, I'm guessing it's worth it.

Hello, are you okay? I'm a Brazilian and I wanted to know if I can translate your fanfic on the Wattpad app, I promise to give you all the credits and add the link to the fanfic