where the stars do not take sides
by WitchofEndor
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Summary
When Azula is nine, she becomes an only child. She hears the Fire Lord call for Zuko's life, and in the morning, her mother and brother are gone. Azula may be young, but she isn't naive. She knows what happened to them. Which makes it all the more surprising when Azula tracks the Avatar down and fights his group of peasant friends, only to find herself staring into an eerily familiar face.
Reader Reviews
Idk_Just_A_Name
10 months agoZuko assuming that his socials skills are just rusty instead of trying to understand what's the deal with Sokka is hilarious (I totally get him, you don't know new people's friend dynamics and internal jokes)
Jay_O
10 months agoI love the way everyone interacts in this fic!
LittleTownTown
10 months agoYES oh zuko my man
B0r3d_P3rs0n
10 months ago{“Oh, no? I figured an attack was all that could explain Sokka’s heart rate!” }GURRRLL!!{And Zuko stares back, because there’s no way that he would ever mistake that face for anyone else. It’s practically Zuko’s face, after all; practically their mother’s. }Bro, don’t make me cry…
SnowballSky12
10 months agoYknow, I wasn't sold by the Zukka ship when I first heard of it but the more fics I read with super cute interactions like this, the more I am won over. Love it
hopelegacy
10 months ago“did you just talk yourself into helping me?” HAHA that one made me laugh out loud
3elizabeth
10 months ago❤️
cooking_with_hailstones
10 months agoOkay this is adorable, and your characterizations are SPOT ON. I'm actually super impressed. Very very excited to read more! (Will I regret starting this fic at 11:30 pm? We shall see!)
TwirlySkirts
10 months agoOooh I love it!
Rockslide
10 months agoIm already obsessed with this. Omg. I love it so much
AnnabethCyone
10 months agoZokka is so cute AHHHHHHH
WellThatsUnfortunate
10 months agoPoor Zuko! I love all the Gaang's personalities. They really do feel like them. And Azula and Zulo meeting ahhhhhhhhh
DancesOnBlades
10 months agoSokka holds his hands out in clear astonishment. “He made up fire-swordbending, Toph. Because he’s not a good firebender.”“Uh huh, really unimpressive,” Toph replies.I love them.
Condensed_Into_Human_Form
10 months agolmao everyone teasing sokka about his crush xD
Madam_Melon_Meow
10 months agoI presume Zhao was the only season one antagonist, and Azula took over once he drowned
Browneyesandhair
10 months agoOh my goodness, sokka is so obvious and zuko is just as oblivious. Looks like azula decided to just run away from her feelings (aka her brother). Great chapter!
chaoskiddeer
10 months agosokkas gay panic gives me LIFE. also poor zuko. traumatized in every universe one way or another. interested to see the backstory behind his scar in this universe 👀
Ronan_Writes
10 months ago"“There isn’t money in places like this,” Zuko responds. “When people pay me in food, it’s because that’s what they can afford. And if you want to help that, then…” Zuko sighs, realising where his own train of thought has brought him. “Then end the war and let the Earth Kingdom stop starving.”"Love this.
Lillyof_thevalley
10 months agoOur poor baby 🥺👍
Swirling_Trench_Coat_of_Angel_Badassery
10 months ago❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Sterlithestral
10 months ago"Yeah, that’s not how building a wall works" HAHAHAHAHA!! XDOOOOH, THEY KNOWWWWWWW!!!!Oh, poor Zuko and his panic attack! Honeyy :( Glad they sat him down.But bright side is he's joining the team now! :DThat meeting with Azula was very dramatic and I enjoyed it immensely. I'll need to save this story. Thank u!
Demihunter07
10 months ago(*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡
Sketchy_made_a_fic
10 months agohaha silly Zuko (haha silly Sokka)
EvemarieoftheEarth
10 months agoooooooooooo this is really fun to read! I'm excited to read more!
Sketchy_made_a_fic
10 months agoLET ME MORE KUDOS ItS MY SECOND TIME READIGJ IEW
Redbookbluebook
10 months agoYessssss amazing! Loved Toph teasing Sokka about his crush. Also enjoyed Zuko overthinking everything.
envyfangirl
10 months agoAwwww, this is cute. And funny. And Zuko really doesn't realise Sokka EMBARASSINGLY large crush on him.
ANDROID_PENGUIN
10 months agooh my fucking god! these bitches gay! good for them! good for them.azula my beloved has shown up!
little_boats_on_a_lake
10 months agoHe isn’t expecting the commotion, but Toph suddenly turns and holds her arms out. “Whoa, are we being attacked?” When she doesn’t get a response, she grins wickedly. “Oh, no? I figured an attack was all that could explain Sokka’s heart rate!” IM DYINGGGGGG THIS IS SO FUNNY
PintoNess
10 months agoI went to try to read all of your works after enjoying your current WIP so much, only to discover I've already READ most of them... which was slightly disappointing because it means I didn't discover a great new author with lots of stories I can read, but rather discovered several of the stories I already loved were written by the same person, which is kinda funny
lizzythefinallyrealizedlesbian
10 months agoAhhh !!!! them seeing each other made me scream out loud I knew it was coming but still!!! Very good I’m so excited to keep reading
Speechless_since_1998
10 months agoI love this concept Good work
whycantwegivellove
10 months agoeveryone stop yelling at toph 😭😭
somethingtodo
10 months ago“He made up fire-swordbending, Toph. Because he’s not a good firebender”Ooh burn!
Altivolous
10 months agoYEEESSSS these chaps are so long omg. Thank youu
ZMDD2017
10 months agoYESSS I LOVE THIS
Valkyrie_Spell_Binder
10 months agoWait, if Zuko left with his mom before Ozai was crowned as Fire Lord, then how does Zuko have his scar? Didn't he get the scar after his mother left?
PoeticNepeta
10 months agoI'm curious how he got the scar in this fic. Also really good stuff
SnapshotLiger
10 months agoMy heart is pounding wow
SkyCherish
10 months agoLiking this so far.
WhenYourFavouriteDies
10 months agoThis is absolutely brilliant, you have the characterisations down perfectly, and especially zuko in this different context where he's trying to survive, it makes sense that he's overthinking exchanges of energy or food. Also everyone bullying Sokka cause he has a crush on Zuko is funny, I really enjoyed reading this, your writing is absolutely brilliant
heart_to_pen_to_paper
10 months agoTHIS!!! WAS!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!
Racby
10 months agoSokka's pining is hilarious, I had to stop to crouch down and snicker at the ground cos the second hand embarassment is real :'DAlso, Zuko's scar? Didn't he ran when he was 11? Hoping I'll see your response to it next chapter
AkaDeca
10 months agoThis is glorious
GammilyIsMe
10 months agoPoor azula is gonna have trust issues to rival Zuko’s now
AsiYepYep
10 months agoSiento el trabajo duro, desesperación y pánico de Zuzu hasta aquí.
ThatOnePerson67
10 months agoAzula, slamming the door open: GUYS HOLLY FUCK Ty Lee: what what happened???Mai: why.Azula: ZUKOS ALIVETy Lee: WHATMai: what
goldendrachma
10 months agowow this chapter was so exciting to read and so cool
hypercell57
10 months agoHow do your fics (although this is only my second) always bring me to tears?This is amazing. Your writing is so beautiful. I love this.
Cacube
10 months agoOof
hollypastl
10 months agooooh this is shaping up to be really interesting. We spent the first chapter with Azula, who showed (well didn't show in universe, but the reader saw) some new emotions, sadness and loneliness at Zuko and Ursa's disappearance. The second chapter following Zuko was even better and I'm interested and invested to know more about him. How does he still have his scar? Did he have to watch his mother die after they ran away? He's not as angry as he was (probably bc he didn't have to deal with the emotional turmoil of his banishment) and resembles his mother's temperament more, will that change at some point? I also can't wait to see if Iroh will show up and how his role will play out.
nebengeschaeft
10 months agoWow I love this concept of Zuko on the run, poor and just trying to survive being but being adopted by the Gaang, I seriously can't wait to read the rest
Wedlucas
10 months agoThis is so good. Love that Zukos lack of social skills works in Sokkas favour and all the teasing just goes over his head. Those poor kids aahhh. Whens he gonna confess to the gaang.
RandomAnon (Guest)
10 months ago'even with an Earth Kingdom name like Lee' in canon, they're hiding in the Fire Nation, hence why Lee is so popular. His appearance combined with the name Lee would, in canon, scream Fire Nation. I'm so confused. Why does Zuko have his scar if he left before he'd get it? Where are Ursa and Iroh? My peanut brain is melting.
youraveragemushroom
10 months agogod that panic attack felt too real like i could feel the emotion bubbling up in my damn op ur such a good writer
Nonesensed
10 months agoI ADORE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS!!!
aspoonie500
10 months agoPoor Zuko, there's a lot of not pleasant going on there. And then the moment of running into Azula. Damn.
Swing_and_Cinema
10 months agoThere's so much good stuff in this chapter! Zuko's concerned about what is owed and earned really shows how little kindness he has seenPoor Soka's crush is obvious. Good thing zuko is oblivious.You do such a good job showing the reader what's going on with the non POV characters, even when the pov character isn't aware!
Raql
10 months agohoo boy is zuko a good kid u_u
marsiepan27
10 months agoIf azula rats him out I will be so mad
Rey_pulga
10 months ago❤❤❤
wings_of_an_angel
10 months ago“Did you just talk yourself into helping me?”LMAO
Pidgeapodge
10 months ago"Zuko thinks that he can probably get Aang playing with the fire a little more by the end of the day"I love how getting a child to play with fire is a GOOD thing in this context.
Madam004
10 months agoAlso the quote at the beginning sums up Zukos life beautifully
Madam004
10 months agoI just loved how you wrote the meeting between Zuko and Azula, it's talented writing
JemTheBookworm
10 months agoAmazing writing!!
Coco_cauldron_cakes
10 months agoThis is brilliant. I assume that Zuko's mother died. Sokka has a crush on Zuko and I assume that Toph has an inkling and loves to mess with him
Imp1969
10 months agoOh, Zuko! He is so lonely, and so wary about other people. He expects the worst of everyone regarding their reactions to his scar and what they might want from him. And the panic attack when Azula shows up is so sad!— They think he’s a child who is damaged and alone because of the war. And Zuko lets them assume, because it’s easier for him, and because… well, in a way, it’s kind of true. 😭😭😭— But even if he isn’t running toward or away from anything, Zuko knows that he can’t stop. 😢 Oh, gosh, I feel so badly for him!— ...Sokka is sitting in front of him and chattering away. Momo the winged lemur is curled up in Zuko’s elbow, also chattering away. As far as Zuko can tell, neither of them is saying anything of any substance. 😂😂😂
3 (Guest)
10 months agoOooohhh
kaetor
10 months ago!!!! Im bad at words but I really like this so far!!!
kkiyomizu
10 months agoAhhhh this is wonderful!!!!
alexandriabeatrix
10 months agoOh god poor Zuko he’s so broken from all the fleeing of the past five years. And Zuko and Azula finally met? Well, this is gonna be good.Thanks so much for writing this!I love what a mess you’ve written Sokka to be haha. And how oblivious Zuko is (which is understandable. The dude hasn’t had anyone genuinely care for him in years, poor baby)
Gryphae
10 months agohaha i love how zuko talked himself into helping. also ofc zuko has a messed up construction of trade as the only possibilof people giving him something.the moment he and azula lock eyes? devastating
crampinmyleg
10 months agoI like the line "the literal Avatar has more important things going on than blowing Zuko’s cover". I like the mindset zuko has about owing people things. It's very interesting. I also lold at zuko feeling annoyed they might build the wall too quickly when he's paid by the dayIt was funny how fighting became a weird experience because toph just spent the whole time complaining about it
Missesdemeanor
10 months agoWhen they invited him to join their group all I could think of was the polar express. "TO THE NORTH POLE OF COURSE!"
Titanik
10 months agoI didn't notice that it was Sokka/Zuko fic so IT WAS A SURPRISE indeed, but a welcome one :D
Star-gazer (Guest)
10 months agoYes please 🤩
Marianna5
10 months agoOkay, but like the part where Zuko convinced himself to join them was fantastic.Lol Sokka's crush is sooo entertaining. Kudos!
llewellyne
10 months agoFirst of all, I love the poem at the beginning.Zuko still sort of Blue-Spiriting is great [Behind him, he hears Sokka cough awkwardly and Katara stifle a laugh] ~ lol[They’ve increased by one person] ~Ha, I love the way you worded this :')[And if you want to help that, then…” Zuko sighs, realising where his own train of thought has brought him. “Then end the war and let the Earth Kingdom stop starving.” Zuko pinches the bridge of his nose. Aang clears his throat. “Did you just talk yourself into helping me…?”] ~Lol, good job Zuko Ugh, I love the meeting between Zuko and Azula!!!
SomewhereBeyondReality
10 months agoOmg, everything around Zuko being so wary to take just a single meal & not wanting to be owe them & how he’s being taken advantage of by Ling (and others in the past) is so sad. Thank goodness he’s found the gaang.
littleskyangel
10 months ago"I'm not a good firebender so I made up an ENTIRELY NEW TECHNIQUE TO DEFEND MYSELF COMBINING SWORDS AND FIREBENDING BECAUSE I'M NOT A GOOD BENDER" that segment had me rolling, I'm having such a blast reading this :)
StarStorm21
10 months agoWelp that didn't go the way anyone expected.
LunarCatNinja
10 months agoOh wow. Things really picked up this chapter! And that's saying something when you look at how things went in the first chapter. Really it just means I'm even more excited about this story!
Tarume
10 months agoSokkas crush is adorable. And Zuko just trying his best is great.
eringeosphere
10 months agoI love this. Wow, the Gaang trying to get Zuko to join them is literally like them trying to befriend a grumpy stray cat. I really like how much better they all got on to start with. The question is, will Zuko bring up who he is before Azula manages to? Not that I don't appreciate that sort of plot line, but I could actually see Zuko at least warning them about the danger they'll be in by adding him? I will enjoy it whatever you write!I also find Zukos insistence that he's not a good firebender, no I'm just managing to control the direction of my flames so I don't melt my swords whilst I'm using them and managing to find a fuel for them that's not anger very very amusing.Thank you for writing!
avaya29
10 months agoI like this. Lovely characterisation.How did Zuko get his scar? According to the previous chapter the Agni Kai didn’t happen?
Pyrite_the_Fool
10 months agoI’m gonna cry sokka was freaking out over zuko being so pretty and zuko was insecure because he thought it was about the scar oh my Godddbdhehsje
runningwafers
10 months agoThis is such an interesting concept and nicely written! Looking forward to more.
oldpotatoe
10 months agothis is honestly kind of incredible, I love your take on this! <3
ComePrima
10 months agoZuko and Azula do look a bit like twins, it's adorable. Azula must be so shocked, I wonder if she will let her father know the news (probably not, Ozai would want her to kill him) and what she will do next. Also, Zuko and the gaang interacting with each other is always good.
Themagicalpotatobean
10 months agoThis is so GOOD!!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
Frosted_Pearl
10 months agoLoving this story! The GAang's interactions with Zuko are great (especially Sokka and Toph ganging up on Zuko about his totally not-impressive in the least fire-swordbending and Zuko's transference of babysitting skills to bending teaching), and I'm excited to see what happens next!
AerieAerie
10 months agoI wish I could leave you another kudos :)
Mouse_in_this_house
10 months agoI'm gonna drop an F in the chat for sokka, may his soul rest in pieces because toph killed him. I wish I could leave kudos more than once this deserves all the kudos
messrsmwpp
10 months agothis is perfectttt,, this au is perfect and azula and zuko’s relationship makes my heart ache, toph is a menace and i love her,, on top of it all, zukka? *chefs kiss* beautiful. “And Toph knows so much about what gold looks like,” Aang adds, snickering. AANG u lil shit,, somehow this was not unexpected and pretty in-character for him and i LOVE this line
Khashana
10 months agoSokka has a cru-ush (and everyone but Zuko knows it)
chronickimlip
10 months agoOMG AZULAShe shookAHHHAND LMAO Toph is such a menace.. can she stop teasing Sokka about his crush. Pls Toph hahahaAnd oh no Zuko :(
Shleapord
10 months agoO h y e s
tedious
10 months agoi love where this is going so far! i’m so excited for the update. everything about this is great - characterization, sokka’s crush, azula and zuko meeting again. i can’t wait for the gaang to find out who they’re working with!
sokkattome (Guest)
10 months agoAww Sokka. Adorable.
Dany_04
10 months agoThank you for writing this story. I watched the Avatar series a few months ago and Azula stole my heart. A large portion of the fans fail to understand that she too was a victim of her parents, especially Ozai for obvious reasons. Unlike Zuko, she had no one to guide her down the right path.
sheep_angel
10 months agoahhh im so excited to read this fic
Nonbinarymess07
10 months agoThis is really good already! :D
CassieWasRight
10 months agoI feel so bad for Azula in this chapter 😭😭
Hinata001
10 months agoThis is a great idea!
AguasAzules
10 months agoCool premise, and now I really want to know what Zuko's been up to
rowan_ashtree
10 months agooh shit it's the return of my feelings about azula........ 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
silvercloudsgraylinings
10 months agoI’m really curious about how this will impact Azula’s mental state. I love this concept, and I’ve never seen it before. Great job! ❤️❤️❤️
EclecticManiac00
10 months agoThis is the best fic I've read in this random. It's incredible. I love it so so much. Perfect ending too. Thank you.
ChaosCupcake
10 months agoAaaaaaaaaaa ✨✨✨✨✨👌🏻
Waywardd_1
10 months agoThe STARK difference from when she changes from calling him Zuzu to Zuko is gonna haunt me, I know it
Kiwibirdkiwi
10 months agoHeartbreaking<3
Jay_O
10 months agoWait but I love the way the summary is the first and last bit, that's really cool
Lethrblaka
10 months agoI just sent this to all my AtlA people. It's so very very beautiful. Heart warming. Tear inducing. Thank you so much!
B0r3d_P3rs0n
10 months agoI‘M LITERALLY CRYING WTF
AulaCicero
10 months agoThis AU is really intriguing. I loved the way Azula was portrayed that she is still the Azula we know in a way still warped by her father, but you can see the love she still has for her brother that shines through despite the brainwashing. Can't wait top read the next chapter.
3elizabeth
10 months ago❤️
notwolverine
10 months agoThis is such a comforting re read fic I adore this so much
Blackbirdy
10 months agoreread kudos!
nairanai
10 months agoholy shit im so in
TwirlySkirts
10 months agoLove how you write Azula ❤️
twix
10 months agoHey, just wanted to let you know that your fic is still spreading joy years later. I've been stuck on my couch with a terrible cold for the past several days, but binging through this is making me feel a little better. Thanks. <3
Sh677
10 months agoInteresting!
WellThatsUnfortunate
10 months agoOkay, I am invested. Is Ursa alive? Is she with Zuko? Did she convince Zuko to leave that knife behind? Because we all know he wouldn't have thought that far ahead on his own.
Madam_Melon_Meow
10 months agoOooh okay
Condensed_Into_Human_Form
10 months agoohhhhh i like this. i'm excited to see how this goes!
Browneyesandhair
10 months agoOhhhh this is interesting! Great chapter!
anniyooo
10 months agowhenever i come across this fic i read it again and its always a delight :) thanks for posting!
Demihunter07
10 months ago(*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡
nev_longbottom
10 months agoThis fic is amazing!!! Thank you for producing it
Velikins
10 months agoLoved it
Swirling_Trench_Coat_of_Angel_Badassery
10 months ago❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Sketchy_made_a_fic
10 months agoHello what is thiss>??
JelloSwingsets
10 months ago<3
ANDROID_PENGUIN
10 months agooh ho ho azula your emotions are showing
GammilyIsMe
10 months agoBonus kudos since I’m rereading
PurpleLotus7
10 months agoI'm enjoying this so much so far! Azula secretly caring for zuko had me in my feels aah and I already love the dynamic between the gaang and zuko. I haven't read the whole chapter yet because I was suddenly thrown off at katara and Sokka laughing at what zuko assumed to be because of his scar. I don't think so but I really wanna know or if I misunderstood because aah I can't handle them laughing at it 😭 so I'm just a little confused over here and wanted to ask
jaron5
10 months agoThat is so messed up. Fuck Ozai for not even explaining. Like. This whole thing. Is not Okay
Rain4WangXian
10 months agothis is the best thing i ever read and i never knew how much i needed it until i did. thank you for writing azula like this 💕
All_This_Dwarvish_Racket
10 months agoHmmmm… so Ursa took Zuko and ran for their lives. (Of course, Ozai wouldn’t bother to look for them because that solves his problem: he gets to have his prodigy daughter as the heir instead of his screwup son.) I’m curious to find out how Zuko ended up with the Gaang in this AU :)
its_not_a_pen
10 months agoI LOVE THIS !!!! IT'S FEELING SAD FOR AZULA HOURS !!! i love how underneath her childish cruelty and indoctrination she still has feelings of compassion that she doesn't even want to admit to herself, or even quite understands. and the little moments of regret and guilt!!! wanting to give zuko's knife to iroh, reflecting on his portrait and trying to put herself in his shoes!!! AHHHH!!! she feels like a real child and not some tiny Machiavellian, I love how fleshed out and complex you've made her character, it's so much more interesting than a straight "she was born evil"
nomdeplumed
10 months agoThis fic is so good. I love it!
svnshine_mxxnlight
10 months agoReading this for the third time ‘cause it’s so good!
LittleTownTown
10 months agoYESSSS
ilovemel
10 months agoftr here!
lameafpun
10 months agothis intro is NEAT as FUCK im gonna blaze through this fic
Altivolous
10 months agoOh gosh, this is an amazing first chap. Excited to see how this pans out(Azula secretly grieving is so sad)
mac_and_dezz
10 months agoOh my heart
WhenYourFavouriteDies
10 months agoThis first chapter is absolutely incredible, I'm so intrigued by this au and especially reading Azula's pov sets everything up brilliantly here, and I enjoyed the writing style. Very excited to read on
battybat
10 months ago!!❤❤❤❤
3 (Guest)
10 months agoOoh
whotho
10 months agoVery cool very fun I love azula
Dopdop2000
10 months agoReading this was the highlight of my week. I forced my roommate to listen to me describe the plot on excruciating detail.
Gods_Writing_Fan
10 months agoI love to take amazing stories and turn them into audiobooks to post on my YouTube channel. I've been looking for a really good Avatar one, and found this gem. May I turn this into an audiobook, please?
AkaDeca
10 months agoZuko: “As you can see I am not dead”
KnightofAwesome
10 months ago(。・ω・。)ノ♡
PandoraZaithysse
10 months agowell you've got me invested
fandom_s
10 months agoHonestly, I had never really considered Zukka as a legitimate ship before I read this. Like, ever since I read this, my mind kinda went over every single moment the two have had, and honestly, this is the only other ZukoxATLA chracter I will accept besides Zutara. Like, just....ZukoxWaterTribe!Siblings....Those are the only two ships I will accept for Zuko, nothing else. Or else polyamory between the three of them, like, Sokka and Katara both date Zuko, but not each other, obvi....So yeah...Also, I really loved this version of the ATLA universe and Azula is a BAMF...and Zuko is an adorable, awkward but well meaning, piece of shit....I love the FireNation!siblings in this so much😊
heart_to_pen_to_paper
10 months agoHECK. I absolutely LOVED this, I can't WAIT to continue!!!!!
GammilyIsMe
10 months agoExciting!! Love the premise
Cacube
10 months ago:)
ThatOnePerson67
10 months agoOh ho ho this is getting interesting.
goldendrachma
10 months agoi really love how you write azula, you do her justice
Caullie
10 months agoI love this so much. I reread this story all the time. The way you portray azula and zukos relationship is my fave in the fandom omg
Raql
10 months agoTEARS TURN TO UGLY SOBS AT THE PORTRAIT
youraveragemushroom
10 months agoi’m going through a redemption azula phase and this is so freaking good ugh i just know i’m gonna be obsessed
TwilightPhoenix
10 months agoHello I love your writing I finished this story and went and read most of your other stories and I just wanted to pop in and say thank you fo writing!
Swing_and_Cinema
10 months agoOh I am loving this concept!
starofjems
10 months agoOoohhhhhhh this first chapter is so beautifully written to hurt my heart and I live for it 😍😍
Obi_Sean_Kenobi
10 months agoThis really drags you in quick! Loving it!
marsiepan27
10 months agoFuck I’m crying you asshole
wings_of_an_angel
10 months agoThis is the first ATLA fic I’ve ever been interested in enough to read! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Imp1969
10 months agoJust started rereading this story and I’m enjoying it so much!
how_does_name
10 months agoThis is fantastic so far. I'm about to binge-read it, we'll see what happens lol. Azula character development! Hell yeah
kalytera
10 months agoOkay so I read this all in a day and I love it to pieces! All the emotional elements and the character development for Azula and Zuko especially were really well done! I love your style of writing and this was such a joy to read!
JemTheBookworm
10 months agoStunning writing!!
Aria_Faye
10 months agoHOOOOOO BOY so I never comment on the first chapter of a finished multi-chapter fic. My logic is, even if the first chapter is good, there's too much time after to be let down. BUT BUDDY. Lemme tell you. I know with 100% certainty that I am NOT gonna be let down by this fic. Just from this little bit here, I have this confidence, and lemme just say...you achieving that kind of trust from a reader (particularly me - i'm very picky) is proof that you're a great writer. So yeah, I could talk about how I'm ALREADY finding your storytelling to be emotional and resonant. How you are making a character with whom it is typically, by definition, hard to empathize into someone relatable and tragic. How the mechanics of your writing feel organic, strong, and developed. But I think that the simple fact that i'm so confident that this is gonna be one helluva ride and I know it will absolutely not disappoint, strictly from this first chapter alone...I think that pretty much says everything I can.And now I buckle myself in for this story. Thank you in advance for writing. I'm sure i'll love it. :)
3 (Guest)
10 months ago🥳🥳🥳🥳
Coco_cauldron_cakes
10 months agoAzula being emotional over her brother's death hits me right in the feels
kaetor
10 months ago*eyes emoji*
alexandriabeatrix
10 months agoOoooh this is such an interesting take! I’m very excited to see where you’ll go with this story!
kkiyomizu
10 months agoOhhhhhhh!!!!!
Gryphae
10 months agooh god this first chapter is wrecking me. azula realising her brother is truly gone in his room? end me. and when she thinks about the life he could have had, and misses him for being the only person who really loved her. and I cried at that. and also I love how she knows her life may be simpler, but it is also lonelier.
crampinmyleg
10 months agoThis is a really interesting idea. I especially liked when azula realises she's older than zuko ever was, and thinks about how he would have looked "had he been able to grow into a teenager, and then into an adult"
Killarney007
10 months agoI love this premise so much. It makes more sense for Ursa to trade Azulon’s life for taking Zuko with her- it kind of bugged me that Ursa left him behind with Ozai when we found out that Ursa was still alive.
Jumping_rope_with_optical_nerves
10 months agoWho would have thought I'd feel so sorry for Azula...
SomewhereBeyondReality
10 months agoOooh this is such an interesting premise! Azula’s I-don’t-care-this-is-better-for-me contrasted with the quiet moments with the knife & portrait are heartbreaking.
llewellyne
10 months agoBut Zuzu would never have left that dagger behind. It can only be here for one reason, because Zuko wouldn’t have left it willingly. Which means that… (An emotion bubbles up within Azula, and she stamps down on it firmly.)~Awh, poor Azula. Her staring at the portrait and wondering how he would've looked is just so sad. Luckily, she won't have to wonder for too long :)(also, RIP her emotional balance when she finds out)
sokkattome (Guest)
10 months agooooOoI’m intrigued
SpaceOasis
10 months agoInteresting... I love your Azula perspective, it feels very real.Thanks for writing!
S0m30n3
10 months agoAnother one?! Yay!
Beneathhebranches
10 months ago!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LunarCatNinja
10 months agoI am starting to really enjoy Azula redemption fics. This one is already off to a great start!
candyPucks
10 months agoOh hello????? 👀👀👀
razortotherozary
10 months agoplease please please continue soon!!! i’m loving this perspective!!
Tarume
10 months agoHow interesting. Azula is an interesting character on her own but you give her a good voice.
Account Deleted
10 months agointeresting premise, ohhh no I really hope ursa didn't just abandon her daughter. awesome chapter, looking forward to the next.
zer0123
10 months agoInteresting premise and a great first chapter :)
lovemesomeliso
10 months agooh my god please do another chapter where the meet and stuff
chronickimlip
10 months agoOh nice

