A Bird in His Hand
by cranky-kyrati (synonymouse)
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CHAPTERS
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RATING
4.8
Summary
Chloe led a perfectly ordinary life, and she was satisfied with her lot. She had friends and family, a hobby or two, and a decent job as a waitress. Things were fine. Until business magnate Jean Girardi noticed her, and nothing would ever be ordinary again.OR: Hot DILF rails girl on a whim.
Reader Reviews
Chapter 1
Just nowHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE--(Its very good)
esophagusnow
Just nowmore please omfg
Berner
Just now“a pet performing a trick” I’m going to strangle the both of you!!! When I found out these two had a fic about them I came RUNNING and was not disappointed. This was amazing
myTBRisgrowing
Just now‘Another chuckle thrummed in Jean’s chest. “Good girl,” he said, and then, “Easy now…”His words made Chloe blush even deeper, if such a thing was possible at this point. Good girl — like she was a child or a pet performing a trick — and yet she wanted more.’🫠😵💫🫠😵💫🥵I am delighted that this exists alongside the art. Thanks for sharing it with us 💛
liquorysce
Just nowThank you for birthing this into existence!!!! You’re doing God’s work! 🥰
m_bee4
Just nowAmazing! Amazing fic to go with incredible art ❤️
theblurredmoments
Just nowI'm subscribing the fuck ri8now hilly shit this is so goodddddd
Chapter 1
Just nowOmg, this is perfect. I so can imagine of that drawing.. nicely done
DonutsMultifandomHellhole
Just nowI LOVE THISSSSSSS
dogberrie
Just nowI think my brain short circuited
vonivox
Just nowoh, i love this. i love this so much
Chapter 1
Just nowWow, they fired her. Jerks.Never mind though, Jean's got a job offering I'm sure she'll be better off with.
Chapter 1
Just nowOML YES you wrote the best fanfic about the best fanart‼️the art has lived in my head rent free for months and now this fic will too and all I can say is: Thank You 🤤🤤🤤
aly_herondale
Just nowHOLY SHIT THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!!! OH MY GOD ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL WRITING 💗💗💗💗 i’m so excited to see what you’re gonna come up with next! thank you for the good fucking food
cheshire2
Just nowYour writing is amazing!!! The references to the drawing is 🥵🔥 can't wait for more! 💕
Athelise
Just nowBless you and your big brain. Thank you for your service
AteLala
Just nowI love that I can read them too 🥺🥺 gorgeously horny writing. Thank you
mostlyvoid_somestars
Just nowi absolutely adore this!!!!!! you put words to the visuals that fit so well, and i'm definitely not alone in hoping you write a thousand more chapters! also the way she lost control while he was just having a casual conversation... *chef's kiss*
AnaelBane
Just nowBien. Acabo de llegar aca porque la artista le dio un rt al capitulo 3 y no me arrepiento de nada.La narración, las escenas, todo concuerda con el arte de Saagelius. Seguiré leyendo para saber como avanzará la relación entre Chloe y Jean ❤️
Chapter 1
Just now"trapped like an insect in that amber gaze" -- Simply beautiful
MissCoppelia
Just nowPhew this was so fucking hot
Chapter 1
Just nowThis story is driving me crazy in all the best ways. I've read all three chapters and I desperately need MORE.
Lisa_Lisa_Sensei
Just nowThis truly makes justice to the art by Saagelius, well done, author! Your writing is superb and detail... it really turned me on, I think I might have felt a bit like Chloe!
Tanya_Martell
Just nowPlease give us more I just doubt this beauty and I need more to survive till my birthday in two weeks *crying*
churchwash
Just nowHey, I don't want to be a Debbie downer, but would it be possible to add a rape/non-con tag to this?Chloe enjoying it doesn't mean that Jean's actions weren't rape/sexual assault. She said no multiple times, he didn't listen, and while her body may have reacted to sexual stimulation, that doesn't mean it was consensual. I understand that the narrative is trying to frame it as such, because ... The narrative doesn't explicitly say she didn't consent? But that doesn't mean it IS consensual.I'm not moralizing or anything, on God. I just think this fic is far past the bounds of "mildly dubious consent," and falls very clearly into the "rape" category. Even if Chloe consents in her own mind, in this first chapter, there is no possible way for Jean to know this - all he truly *knows* is that she said no multiple times.There are also themes of sexual extortion and sex trafficking, but I understand that the narrative isn't trying to frame it as such. Just something to be aware of, as the author.It's well-written and hot as hell, but it was a shock to come in expecting "mild dubcon" by virtue of the power dynamic, and getting hit hard with genuine sexual assault that's excused in the narrative by Chloe enjoying it.No hate at all, but again, it would be more helpful to tag this as rape/non-con.
cozymochi
Just nowOooooh I can't believe it took me this long to find this! I came across saagelius's artwork on twitter and loved the Jean and Chloe's dynamic. cranky-kyrati (synonymouse), I think you did a banger job at writing this chapter and this is only the first chapter ❤️. The characterizations and dialogue are complex and engaging! I look forward to reading the other chapters that you have written. ^^
Healthy_Obsessions
Just nowHot and deliciously well done!
Zrofyre
Just nowHello! I'm absolutely loving this - came here on a rec. I'd like to ask - I know it probably isn't KNOWN but do you have any hint is this'll end in HEA? Or HFN? Or is it gonna turn DARK dark?Mainly cuz I want to get INVESTED but I don't want to dive into something I'm not ready for.Your writing is super thrilling, detailed and REAL. Thank you foe doing this!
Chapter 1
Just nowNot in the first chapterrr
DonutsMultifandomHellhole
Just nowFEASTS
Chapter 1
Just nowSeeing the art on TikTok and tracing the origin of the pic led me to this beautiful smut.
Wolfer_Cross18
Just nowI saw the full art by saagelius and damn I felt butterflies in my stomach ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
RiverEmpress
Just nowOoh 😋 I've just followed you in twitter, saw your art and came straight here. This is exceptionally yummy 🥵
Chapter 1
Just nowJesus that was great. Found this story from someone sharing the art posts on saagelius' Twitter.Great work, what a start.
WeirdoOfTheCentury
Just nowI want my own Jean now 🤣🤣❤️❤️
luparius
Just now"he was masturbating inside her" god that heightens the imagery so much
cozyreinsfw
Just nowThis is such a lovely chapter!
Succubutt024
Just nowholy shit this broke my head open in the best unimaginable way
Eat_Jins_Ass
Just nowsososososososo hot. love the artist and what you've done with these characters. also it's been a minute since ive read full blown public sex and it alllllways hits 🥴
KisaOmbra
Just nowLove this fic, love the possible story behind the images and how you have chosen to write the characters.I keep seeing that Saagelius has drawn more art so really hoping you will write another chapter!
hikarin69
Just nowI think I popped a girl boner. I love that artist’s works but this fic? literally the strawberry on the cake, it is perfect and so darn hot.
Chapter 1
Just nowI love it!
Chapter 1
Just nowIdk what to write here but um.. Yea
Chapter 1
Just nowThis was so hot! After drooling over the art, you’ve put their story to words! Thank you!
randomcookie
Just nowFELL TO MY KNEES THIS IS AMAZING!!!! i came running here when i saw on twitter that there's a fic about saagelius' art. thank you so much for blessing humanity with this piece of literature!!!
Vegemiteri0ts
Just nowOmg omg omg. I am so excited for this story
DaisytheDevourer
Just nowHoly fuck, so flushed and face is just burning red and panting reading this. This is exactly how was imagining him. This is doing things already just in the first chapter. Think its time to break out the trusty magic wand soon haha.
Chapter 1
Just nowi love you for writing this 💋💋
crocozara
Just nowI go back to this fic every now & again because the writing is genuinely so good. The sensuality, the flavor, the heat. Applause every time.
DonutsMultifandomHellhole
Just nowI LOVE THISSSSSSS





