A Bird in His Hand
by cranky-kyrati (synonymouse)
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CHAPTERS
7
WORDS
24.8K
RATING
4.8
Summary
Chloe led a perfectly ordinary life, and she was satisfied with her lot. She had friends and family, a hobby or two, and a decent job as a waitress. Things were fine. Until business magnate Jean Girardi noticed her, and nothing would ever be ordinary again.OR: Hot DILF rails girl on a whim.
Reader Reviews
Chapter 1
10 months agoHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE--(Its very good)
esophagusnow
10 months agomore please omfg
Berner
10 months ago“a pet performing a trick” I’m going to strangle the both of you!!! When I found out these two had a fic about them I came RUNNING and was not disappointed. This was amazing
myTBRisgrowing
10 months ago‘Another chuckle thrummed in Jean’s chest. “Good girl,” he said, and then, “Easy now…”His words made Chloe blush even deeper, if such a thing was possible at this point. Good girl — like she was a child or a pet performing a trick — and yet she wanted more.’🫠😵💫🫠😵💫🥵I am delighted that this exists alongside the art. Thanks for sharing it with us 💛
liquorysce
10 months agoThank you for birthing this into existence!!!! You’re doing God’s work! 🥰
m_bee4
10 months agoAmazing! Amazing fic to go with incredible art ❤️
theblurredmoments
10 months agoI'm subscribing the fuck ri8now hilly shit this is so goodddddd
Chapter 1
10 months agoOmg, this is perfect. I so can imagine of that drawing.. nicely done
DonutsMultifandomHellhole
10 months agoI LOVE THISSSSSSS
dogberrie
10 months agoI think my brain short circuited
vonivox
10 months agooh, i love this. i love this so much
Chapter 1
10 months agoWow, they fired her. Jerks.Never mind though, Jean's got a job offering I'm sure she'll be better off with.
Chapter 1
10 months agoOML YES you wrote the best fanfic about the best fanart‼️the art has lived in my head rent free for months and now this fic will too and all I can say is: Thank You 🤤🤤🤤
aly_herondale
10 months agoHOLY SHIT THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!!! OH MY GOD ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL WRITING 💗💗💗💗 i’m so excited to see what you’re gonna come up with next! thank you for the good fucking food
cheshire2
10 months agoYour writing is amazing!!! The references to the drawing is 🥵🔥 can't wait for more! 💕
Athelise
10 months agoBless you and your big brain. Thank you for your service
AteLala
10 months agoI love that I can read them too 🥺🥺 gorgeously horny writing. Thank you
mostlyvoid_somestars
10 months agoi absolutely adore this!!!!!! you put words to the visuals that fit so well, and i'm definitely not alone in hoping you write a thousand more chapters! also the way she lost control while he was just having a casual conversation... *chef's kiss*
AnaelBane
10 months agoBien. Acabo de llegar aca porque la artista le dio un rt al capitulo 3 y no me arrepiento de nada.La narración, las escenas, todo concuerda con el arte de Saagelius. Seguiré leyendo para saber como avanzará la relación entre Chloe y Jean ❤️
Chapter 1
10 months ago"trapped like an insect in that amber gaze" -- Simply beautiful
MissCoppelia
10 months agoPhew this was so fucking hot
Chapter 1
10 months agoThis story is driving me crazy in all the best ways. I've read all three chapters and I desperately need MORE.
Lisa_Lisa_Sensei
10 months agoThis truly makes justice to the art by Saagelius, well done, author! Your writing is superb and detail... it really turned me on, I think I might have felt a bit like Chloe!
Tanya_Martell
10 months agoPlease give us more I just doubt this beauty and I need more to survive till my birthday in two weeks *crying*
churchwash
10 months agoHey, I don't want to be a Debbie downer, but would it be possible to add a rape/non-con tag to this?Chloe enjoying it doesn't mean that Jean's actions weren't rape/sexual assault. She said no multiple times, he didn't listen, and while her body may have reacted to sexual stimulation, that doesn't mean it was consensual. I understand that the narrative is trying to frame it as such, because ... The narrative doesn't explicitly say she didn't consent? But that doesn't mean it IS consensual.I'm not moralizing or anything, on God. I just think this fic is far past the bounds of "mildly dubious consent," and falls very clearly into the "rape" category. Even if Chloe consents in her own mind, in this first chapter, there is no possible way for Jean to know this - all he truly *knows* is that she said no multiple times.There are also themes of sexual extortion and sex trafficking, but I understand that the narrative isn't trying to frame it as such. Just something to be aware of, as the author.It's well-written and hot as hell, but it was a shock to come in expecting "mild dubcon" by virtue of the power dynamic, and getting hit hard with genuine sexual assault that's excused in the narrative by Chloe enjoying it.No hate at all, but again, it would be more helpful to tag this as rape/non-con.
cozymochi
10 months agoOooooh I can't believe it took me this long to find this! I came across saagelius's artwork on twitter and loved the Jean and Chloe's dynamic. cranky-kyrati (synonymouse), I think you did a banger job at writing this chapter and this is only the first chapter ❤️. The characterizations and dialogue are complex and engaging! I look forward to reading the other chapters that you have written. ^^
Healthy_Obsessions
10 months agoHot and deliciously well done!
Zrofyre
10 months agoHello! I'm absolutely loving this - came here on a rec. I'd like to ask - I know it probably isn't KNOWN but do you have any hint is this'll end in HEA? Or HFN? Or is it gonna turn DARK dark?Mainly cuz I want to get INVESTED but I don't want to dive into something I'm not ready for.Your writing is super thrilling, detailed and REAL. Thank you foe doing this!
Chapter 1
10 months agoNot in the first chapterrr
DonutsMultifandomHellhole
10 months agoFEASTS
Chapter 1
10 months agoSeeing the art on TikTok and tracing the origin of the pic led me to this beautiful smut.
Wolfer_Cross18
10 months agoI saw the full art by saagelius and damn I felt butterflies in my stomach ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
RiverEmpress
10 months agoOoh 😋 I've just followed you in twitter, saw your art and came straight here. This is exceptionally yummy 🥵
Chapter 1
10 months agoJesus that was great. Found this story from someone sharing the art posts on saagelius' Twitter.Great work, what a start.
WeirdoOfTheCentury
10 months agoI want my own Jean now 🤣🤣❤️❤️
luparius
10 months ago"he was masturbating inside her" god that heightens the imagery so much
cozyreinsfw
10 months agoThis is such a lovely chapter!
Succubutt024
10 months agoholy shit this broke my head open in the best unimaginable way
Eat_Jins_Ass
10 months agosososososososo hot. love the artist and what you've done with these characters. also it's been a minute since ive read full blown public sex and it alllllways hits 🥴
KisaOmbra
10 months agoLove this fic, love the possible story behind the images and how you have chosen to write the characters.I keep seeing that Saagelius has drawn more art so really hoping you will write another chapter!
hikarin69
10 months agoI think I popped a girl boner. I love that artist’s works but this fic? literally the strawberry on the cake, it is perfect and so darn hot.
Chapter 1
10 months agoI love it!
Chapter 1
10 months agoIdk what to write here but um.. Yea
Chapter 1
10 months agoThis was so hot! After drooling over the art, you’ve put their story to words! Thank you!
randomcookie
10 months agoFELL TO MY KNEES THIS IS AMAZING!!!! i came running here when i saw on twitter that there's a fic about saagelius' art. thank you so much for blessing humanity with this piece of literature!!!
Vegemiteri0ts
10 months agoOmg omg omg. I am so excited for this story
DaisytheDevourer
10 months agoHoly fuck, so flushed and face is just burning red and panting reading this. This is exactly how was imagining him. This is doing things already just in the first chapter. Think its time to break out the trusty magic wand soon haha.
Chapter 1
10 months agoi love you for writing this 💋💋
crocozara
10 months agoI go back to this fic every now & again because the writing is genuinely so good. The sensuality, the flavor, the heat. Applause every time.
DonutsMultifandomHellhole
10 months agoI LOVE THISSSSSSS



