Harry Potter and The Veela Covenant

Wait… the chickens were petunia and Dudley? So they had children?And the duck was Vernon?Holy shit I did not see that coming!

Fun read but god damn Hermione got the short end lol. I mean she is a 13 year old with only 1 friend and was groomed by an old man to do his bidding. Give the girl a break jesus haha

Eh... had to finish it with cannibalism and making poor Hermoine a cat for the remainder of her life. Seriously jacked up. (Yeah, she was a bit of a deluded CHILD manipulated by the master-manipulator; doesn't deserve that though. They're treating her worse than they did the two Veela who tried to brainwash them all.)

YYYYYEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHHHH

Wait. We now know that the Dursleys were captured and transfigured by the Veela to torment the freaks. So if Kitten-Hermione is eating the leftovers of Duck-Vernon...does that mean the hen and rooster are....Petunia and Dudley? And they bred...I'm going to be sick.

So in the end, he ended up trading one prison for another better prison. Well I guess that’s what we do in life……

I wouldn't call this a one-shot but this is a good and fascinating story. I'd love to read any epilogue you write for this story.

Did not see the cat ending coming. Is Vernon suppose to be the duck hermione is eating or is it the duck that they started with to begin homesteading? Also, unlike your previous fic, I feel like you have a lot of potential for lemon one-shots with the five women.

Dumbledore getting taken down by the killing curse was icing on the cake. The ole coot never learned when to surrender and he had to find out the hard way. Now Harry no longer has to worry about Dumbledore trying to use him as a pawn. Great story, keep up the hard work!

Well, this is a delightfully horrific story. There's no underaged tag which is a problem since Harry was like fourteen during the tournament and Fleur was seventeen (Disregarding the other members of the harem). I guess it's ironic that the Veela Nation ends up treating Harry like how authors usually describe how Wizards treat Veela; Like breeding tools. It's obvious that none of the girls actually love Harry and I feel sorry for him since he has literally no choice but to love and trust these women who stalked him and groomed him while he was in a delicate state of mind. No different than Moreope and Tom Riddle Snr really. I liked it for the horror factor, it left me wanting to kill everyone and take Harry somewhere where he could actually be loved.

I can't believe I am saying this but thank whatever deity for evil Dumbledore's kidnapping attempt.The last chapter made me despise the council and and the nation. It was just another form of tyranny and slavery, marginally different from Harry's existence before only safety was replaced with pleasure and "love".

Dumbledore being treated for a bad fall serves him right for meddling with Harry’s life. Hermione spying on Harry for the ole coot wasn’t a surprise, since she was pretty much Dumbledore’s carefully groomed spy in canon. Plus, Hermione also turned out to be a hard-core hypocrite. Nice to see Hermione get struck with a spell and knocked out-cold for trying to stick her nose where it shouldn’t be. Good to see that Harry and Fleur finally got to spend some time together. Great chapter, keep up the hard work!

Harry bonding with Hildegard and Adolphine was an unexpected bonus despite Fleur being unsure to share Harry with them. Now Harry won’t have to worry about Dumbledore and his minions manipulating him for their selfish Greater Good agenda. Great chapter, keep up the hard work!

I liked it a lot, although I'm not a fan of semi-open endings, I would like it if you could add, scenes with the other 2 and maybe little glimpses of their life from here

Shits about to hit the fan for Dumbledore once he somehow finds out about the ritual. What the veela nation doesn’t know is that Dumbledore isn’t really Harry’s magical guardian and that he self-appointed himself as such, thus usurping that position from Sirius to ensure Harry follows the path the ole coot chose for him. Great chapter, keep up the hard work.

I snorted my water when Dumbles got sniped. Always love seeing him get kicked down a few pegs, or off a tall ledge

Poor Harry, even the Veela Nation doesn't give a fuck about Harry. Even Fleur no matter how much she thinks she loves him, sees him only as property.

Poor Tonksie. She always gets some of the most horrible things done to her in fics I've noticed. Any chance you might do a fic involving her and Harry paired together at some point?

I wonder what happened to Bill and Tonks when they were confronted by the EEB upon going to the Dursleys. That won’t sit well with Dumbledore, but the ole coot just takes it upon himself to meddle with Harry’s life and deny him a happy life. It’ll eventually catch up to him, and he may very well be confined to a mental hospital. Great start, keep up the hard work!

Would you take a request?

Well, this one chapter felt like a solid outline of about 10 chapters worth of material. Interesting comedy/drama idea. I’d love to see it expanded with more narrative and events shown on the page, rather than told to us in exposition.

Wait… the chickens were petunia and Dudley? So they had children?And the duck was Vernon?Holy shit I did not see that coming!

Fun read but god damn Hermione got the short end lol. I mean she is a 13 year old with only 1 friend and was groomed by an old man to do his bidding. Give the girl a break jesus haha

Eh... had to finish it with cannibalism and making poor Hermoine a cat for the remainder of her life. Seriously jacked up. (Yeah, she was a bit of a deluded CHILD manipulated by the master-manipulator; doesn't deserve that though. They're treating her worse than they did the two Veela who tried to brainwash them all.)

Wait. We now know that the Dursleys were captured and transfigured by the Veela to torment the freaks. So if Kitten-Hermione is eating the leftovers of Duck-Vernon...does that mean the hen and rooster are....Petunia and Dudley? And they bred...I'm going to be sick.

Did not see the cat ending coming. Is Vernon suppose to be the duck hermione is eating or is it the duck that they started with to begin homesteading? Also, unlike your previous fic, I feel like you have a lot of potential for lemon one-shots with the five women.

Dumbledore getting taken down by the killing curse was icing on the cake. The ole coot never learned when to surrender and he had to find out the hard way. Now Harry no longer has to worry about Dumbledore trying to use him as a pawn. Great story, keep up the hard work!

YYYYYEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHHHH

Well, this is a delightfully horrific story. There's no underaged tag which is a problem since Harry was like fourteen during the tournament and Fleur was seventeen (Disregarding the other members of the harem). I guess it's ironic that the Veela Nation ends up treating Harry like how authors usually describe how Wizards treat Veela; Like breeding tools. It's obvious that none of the girls actually love Harry and I feel sorry for him since he has literally no choice but to love and trust these women who stalked him and groomed him while he was in a delicate state of mind. No different than Moreope and Tom Riddle Snr really. I liked it for the horror factor, it left me wanting to kill everyone and take Harry somewhere where he could actually be loved.

I can't believe I am saying this but thank whatever deity for evil Dumbledore's kidnapping attempt.The last chapter made me despise the council and and the nation. It was just another form of tyranny and slavery, marginally different from Harry's existence before only safety was replaced with pleasure and "love".

I wouldn't call this a one-shot but this is a good and fascinating story. I'd love to read any epilogue you write for this story.

So in the end, he ended up trading one prison for another better prison. Well I guess that’s what we do in life……

Harry bonding with Hildegard and Adolphine was an unexpected bonus despite Fleur being unsure to share Harry with them. Now Harry won’t have to worry about Dumbledore and his minions manipulating him for their selfish Greater Good agenda. Great chapter, keep up the hard work!

I liked it a lot, although I'm not a fan of semi-open endings, I would like it if you could add, scenes with the other 2 and maybe little glimpses of their life from here

Shits about to hit the fan for Dumbledore once he somehow finds out about the ritual. What the veela nation doesn’t know is that Dumbledore isn’t really Harry’s magical guardian and that he self-appointed himself as such, thus usurping that position from Sirius to ensure Harry follows the path the ole coot chose for him. Great chapter, keep up the hard work.

I snorted my water when Dumbles got sniped. Always love seeing him get kicked down a few pegs, or off a tall ledge

I wonder what happened to Bill and Tonks when they were confronted by the EEB upon going to the Dursleys. That won’t sit well with Dumbledore, but the ole coot just takes it upon himself to meddle with Harry’s life and deny him a happy life. It’ll eventually catch up to him, and he may very well be confined to a mental hospital. Great start, keep up the hard work!

Dumbledore being treated for a bad fall serves him right for meddling with Harry’s life. Hermione spying on Harry for the ole coot wasn’t a surprise, since she was pretty much Dumbledore’s carefully groomed spy in canon. Plus, Hermione also turned out to be a hard-core hypocrite. Nice to see Hermione get struck with a spell and knocked out-cold for trying to stick her nose where it shouldn’t be. Good to see that Harry and Fleur finally got to spend some time together. Great chapter, keep up the hard work!

Poor Harry, even the Veela Nation doesn't give a fuck about Harry. Even Fleur no matter how much she thinks she loves him, sees him only as property.

Well, this one chapter felt like a solid outline of about 10 chapters worth of material. Interesting comedy/drama idea. I’d love to see it expanded with more narrative and events shown on the page, rather than told to us in exposition.

Would you take a request?

Poor Tonksie. She always gets some of the most horrible things done to her in fics I've noticed. Any chance you might do a fic involving her and Harry paired together at some point?