Fall Asleep (Fall For You)

Oh!!!I love your work soooooo much!!!! Can i translate it into chinese and let more chinese kookv fans see it?

This is my fave fic EVER ! I'm re reading it right now and woooooooah ! I started this when it was first published and now it's compleated ! I feel like a proud mother !

That was the best first chapter I’ve read in a while. I didn’t know whether to laugh or few bad for Taehyung !!! XD ^^^

ahhh i love this so muchits so dynamic and colourful im already addictedtaehyung is too precious and i cant wait to see where this goesthe description sounds so cute !!! jungkookie i hope hell be okthank you for writing !! its brilliant <3

Omg!!!! SUCH a great start authornim. I'm extremely excited for this ahhhhh ❤️❤️❤️ Great great job ily for this, honestly I can't wait AWW. I hope Kook opens up to Tae soon, no one can resist that cutie. Ahh and I love ur characterization, lowkey accurate. Honestly a wonderful chapter, thank you so much & keep it up!!!!

Omg!! This is soo good!!I absolutly loved everything about it <3

ah i'm really excited to read this already!!it sounds great so far and I'm looking forward to finding out more about jungkook!!and asdhj awww tae is so cute?? ah i wanna squish him >_<thanks for writing!! looking forward to this :)

I love this so much. I don't know how you did it but I finished reading this an hour ago and I literally can't stop thinking about it and it's only 1 chapter??? Like I don't want to be annoying or anything but honestly the faster the update the better I want to read the story for the rest of my life this shit is so up my alley oh my god v good I can't praise you enough please give me more i'm literally addicted this is so good. Okay i'll stop now. (Please update soon I love this. Fave Taekook so far.)

Ohmygoodnesssss!Yes. YES. YES! I dig it ^-^

Omfg this seems so interesting. I love the plot. Cant wait to read more!

Ahhh omg I'm so excited for this fic! Loved this chapter sooo much and can't wait for the upcoming ones. This plot line is so different and unique, I absolutely love it. Goodluck with chapter 2, fighting!!! ❤xx

I loved this!! I cant wait to see what happens next.

Ahhhh, I'm very much looking forward to the next updates. The storyline seems great!!!

Oh i love this already, I'm excited for chapter 2!

Oh my gosh a new chapter!!!! This is so exciting! :)))))))))))))

aigooi'm in love with this man, what if tae faint because of the lack of sleep?jungkook needs to sleep with him at least onceplease, keep writing this beautiful fic{sorry for the english, i'm brazilian and still learning}

i already love this story c:, in the tags i choked when " and is a bit of a dick " lmaooo

- “Alright, to be completely honest that went a lot better than I expected.” - wOW

I LOVE THEM BOTH TOO MUCH UGH

eagerly waiting for your update tdgjcdsetgx

me too yoongi

i just wanna suggest you to use different words instead of repeating their names all the time !!i luv this story

I love this chapter. Everything from the beginning till the very end.The last Suga's phrase and the way Jungkook reacting harshly, and Tae's fall and his "baby". It's just perfect.I can't believe I haven't read this story before.

i just want to say thank you for writing this. i love it so much and i hope you continue writing. you’re amazing

I. Love. It.Omg I loved every single bit of it. It's the right amount of cheesy, right amount of dramatic and u framed the story so perfectly! I have been reading this story from chapter 1 and it has been an awesome journey for me. I have grinned foolishly in the subway when suddenly remembering a funny scene from this fic, cried my heart out when sad things happened, and cooed at all the adorable taekook and yoonmin moments. I started looking forward to frigging Mondays(yup, the day students hate) because that was the day my favourite authors updated their stories, one of who were u. Thank u for making my life more happy:)) And also the last chapter, I was almost about to cry but then *that* part came and I was like wow, didn't expect that (trust me that's a rare thing coming out of my mouth cause I read so many fanfics that I'm usually right on what's coming next), but gotta say that i wasn't disappointed at all. Nice fanfic! One of the best taekook fic I've ever read!

Uhh I already commented but forgot to say this, can't wait for ur next works!!

it was so Goood and I am here to thank you souch for it ! Its been a while since I last enjoyed reading❤❤

I ALREADY KNOW IM GONNA LOVE THIS FIC AIDHSKJSKS

I am deathly scared to start this at 11:33 pm at night because I know my ass will not put it down until I finish all 149k words.

I was right. I am moving on to chapter two.

SCREAMS I LOVE THIS THIS IS ALREADY SO WONDERFUL

rereading♡ love this fic so much!!

Oh my dear shitting Christ. Of all ways the first chapter could have gone, I did not expect that

I’m in love with the ending. It fits so perfectly and it just seems right, if you know what I mean. I love everything about this story, thank you so so so much for writing it.

Jk is over exaggerated , and taehyung 's character u don't show development enough?

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT.

This fanfic was really well written- don't get me wrong. But there was something about it that just didn't sit right with me, and I realized that it's because Taehyung is literally Bella Swan from Twilight. He's the butt of the joke, not taken seriously, is steamrolled by the other characters, is overall a very weak protagonist and is caught up in an abusive relationship with Jungkook. Taehyung's strongest point in the whole story is when he broke up with Jungkook, because he realized that he had a breaking point that had been breached. But instead of allowing Taehyung to better himself, he wallowed and found himself completely and utterly lost without Jungkook- similar to Bella wallowing for months after Edward left her. He even had a classic Bella moment- when he hallucinated Jungkook at his performance, which gave him the strength to perform well, showing just how dependent he is on Jungkook. I am glad that this fic ended the way it did, with Jungkook addressing his problems and getting better, thus redeeming himself, but it did not address Taehyung's weak and clingy personality. He had almost no character development. I apologize for the rant but please keep in mind that a strong character who can stand up for himself/herself/themselves is better than a weak protagonist any day.

OofKookie has got a bit of a problem This all works out in the end tho...right?

Hallo! I'm Elvina. Can I translate your fanfiction to russian and publish on the site similar to ao3, please?https://ficbook.net/

pfft isn't he the alien

I swear to god I've read this story before except between Eren and Levi from attack on titan... this is, very simmilar.

I may or may not have stayed up all last night reading this.Just as I may or may not have risked reading the smut scene in public today because I had to know what happened.YOU'RE INCREDIBLE

I read this a few months ago but realized I never commented anything... I still think about this fanfic a lot!! It is incredibly well written and even now after reading billions of fanfics it’s still one of my favorites. Thank you for writing this ❤️

This is one of the most beautiful amazing works I have ever read, I APPLAUD YOU

You're a brilliant writer! I really just binge-read the story because it's so good! Thank you for writing such great stories ❤️

It's really an awesome story. I've really enjoyed it..

SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!*launches thousands upon thousands of ballons and party poppers as soon as you walk in* It's here! It's here! One of the most of the most wonderful times of the year: FANFIC AUTHOR APPRECIATION DAY

I mean, kinda makes sense that he doesn’t want a roomie if he literally can’t fall asleep with another person in the room/bed. The lack of sleep has got to be driving him mad!

"He regrets watching that one horror movie with the obsessive roommate and immediately begins to think of the worst possible scenarios."The Roommate?! Why, that movie came out the same year I went to college too. Scared me sh*tless. Taehyung, you have a real fear there. Made me want to make a Roommate Questionaire. Example questions are "Do you take medications?'*Yes *No *Not Anymore LMAO!!Smh

I FREAKING LOVE THIS FIC. thank you for writing it!!!