Right Hand Red
future switchingHogwarts Eighth YearLoss of VirginityHarry Potter - J. K. RowlingParty GamesDrunkennessSecret RelationshipBlow JobsAnal SexUnresolved Romantic TensionBottom DracoAngst and HumorFirst TimeHand JobsUnresolved Sexual Tension

Right Hand Red

by lq_traintracks (lumosed_quill)

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CHAPTERS

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RATING

4.8

Summary

Harry felt Malfoy's breath on his lips as they came together over the bottle, hands firmly planted on the floor as though they each needed their familiar soil, refusing to cross into enemy territory. Except that Malfoy no longer felt like his enemy.  Malfoy felt inevitable.

Reader Reviews

sortofadisaster

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I am madly in love with this story. You combined many of my favorite things, eight year, party games and snape (even if he is a portrait/ghost). I started this earlier today and it is now 6am, but I just couldn't stop. This is one of the best stories I have read in quite some time, thank you for writing it.

birdsofshore

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Oh, I started reading late last night... just a little bit. Just a few paragraphs. Well, you know how THAT goes ;) I whooshed all the way to Harry sitting in his big gay chair and I laughed as much as the first time I read it. Bloody excellent, dear. I'm on my phone, so I won't write scads, but this is a delight and a joy and a glory. I'm totally jealous of how you manipulate this big ensemble cast with dexterity and confidence. I adore the way you root it firmly in canon and keep sprinkling snippets of original magic and things like Snape teaching DADA. And I'm mesmerised by the way they've only been back a short while but already, for Harry, it's all about Malfoy. Old habits die hard ;)Harry is so deliciously horny and confused and adorably Harry. At the heart of him there's such a lovely optimism, even when you're torturing him. He just loves humanity. (Because you do <3)I read the rest of this chapter this morning and it's irresistible. Harry teasing Malfoy with his mixture of cheek and determination (while secretly being excited they're talking about their penises) is an utter delight. I'm saving the next part as an incentive for when I get my shit done today, but I'm already beaming at the thought of it. Thank you, you clever, dear thing, for this.

AmoretteHD

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So already I am IN LOVE with this! This first chapter is amazing! I feel like I'll never have to read another eighth year fic again because you've given me all I could have ever wanted. And on top of it, PARTY GAMES!????!! OMG! One of my favorite tropes!!! I loved the twister scene, it set up for all kinds of crazy UST. I love watching Harry slowly discover his feelings for Malfoy, Harry's erections which seem to always be three steps ahead of him, and just the way you wrote him in general. Ron is so funny, as is the rest of the cast, and I found myself laughing out loud MANY times! I also love the sweet way Draco's ears turn pink when Harry gives him attention; it's really the cutest and most endearing thing. I cant wait to see what happens.

Chapter 1

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Oh my GOSHH fjdshfdfd just damn i enjoyed this way too much my gods........................GONNA FUCKING SCREAM FOR NO FUCKING REASON I JUST LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!?!?!?!?!? *sobbing* gonna go finish.

josephinestone

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It was tough to choose which one to read first, but party games is one of my favorite tropes.sleep together? this made me chuckle far more than it probably should have. Foreshadowing...It’s Snape. Yay! *Bouncing up and down and clapping* Why is no one else cheering? Everyone should be cheering! A little too much whiskey, plus Malfoy being not a git, equals searing heat up one's spine. *squee* I love in denial Harry.Cho and Ginny, yes. But not Malfoy. Well, except that they all played Quidditch. And that they were all Seekers at one point. (Ginny played Seeker, when Harry couldn’t.) Because he wasn't just gay. He was gay for Malfoy.And that was a whole new level of acceptance. LOL.Loving this!

Chapter 1

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I'm so in love with this, you have no idea. I loved it from the very start, but you really truly had me when Harry started waxing hormonal about Draco's knuckles. X

midnight4568

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this is gENIUS WORK OmG

MTC

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Oh my gosh, I'm so excited about this fic! For starters, eighth year fic (yey)! Eighth years sharing a dorm and eating together (double yey)! You present us with lots of group interaction (triple yey!), which is I think somewhat rare in the fandom. I can actually visualize their personalities, Pansy being nasty, Seamus being loud, etc.Also, you've portrayed Harry's worshipping post-war exactly like I imagined it. You didn't play it down one notch, and that was cool.And what is up with all the staring. Hooooot! :D I can totally see that playing out between Harry and Draco without sounding farfetched. Which brings me to the twister... the sexual tension there, damn. That was one fun and sexually charged game. I really enjoyed that part!!!But really, it's hard to pick apart best moments, there is just so much gold throughout. Ron talking about talking of prospect sex with Hermione. Ah!:p The ferret, the hole, the car, Harry's morning hood and that moment at the bathroom entrance. Harry's failed attempts at broaching the subject of being gay with Ron.I have to say the art is lovely so far; the artist really has a good grasp of perspective and 3D, and the play with the shades of gray is masterful!So yeah... the entire thing is truly awesome; I'm just having so much for reading it, I don't want it to end eeeever!

steakaddictsanonymous

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I love this fic. It is so in character, I can actually feel it happen, I love the references and love given to the book. It really feels like the "what happened after"and oh my god the parallels!! It feels like actually happening

gracerene

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Oh gosh I love this already! I adore eighth year fics and this one is everything I love about them! I'm really enjoying getting to see all the characters, and I must say that I don't see nearly enough fics with Ron and Harry talking about the whole sex/Hermione thing, which I really like.

DiverTazSC

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Then he consoled the one-man band.Very cute. Love Snape as a potrait professor.

299astory

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This is AMAZING! I am speechless. I want to leave a good comment but I am just so excited about this whole story I don't even know what to say. Couldn't sleep last night so I started reading this around 1am. Turns out that was a terrible idea because it was amazing and I finished 2 and half chapters before I really had to sleep haha. Everyone is written so well. I love the choice of putting all the eighth years in a dorm together. I loved seeing all their relationships develop. Your Harry and Draco are perfection. Seriously I wish I could put into words how much I enjoyed this. Thank you guys so much for writing this and sharing it. It is just amazing to see the Harry Potter fandom still in action :) Great work!!!

dicta_contrion

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Eight year AND party games AND delicious tension AND Harry's revelations AND dueling AND lines so funny I keep giggling maniacally? Omg. Omg. Feeling so spoiled/excited/in heaven. Can't wait to read more!

Chapter 1

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This fic was lovely in every single way. Towards the end, I was in so many tears. Fantastic job!

Aeternum

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This is brilliant! Funny with just the right amount of angst from the trauma they all went through the previous year. And this has to be the best Portrait Snape I've ever seen. Fantastic idea! Oh, and Gordon the ferret is adorable. :D

Wolfey

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Oh I loved this, definitely one of my favorites!!

Blue_Pyro

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Ughhh ugggghh UGHTHISWASABSOLUTELYBRILLIANTThis is actually a belated comment as I read this nearly a month ago but this, being the awesomeness that it is,just kept springing up at me at the most random times. So you know. Comment.I loved loved loved adored this story. Your Draco, your Harry GODAnd I was in tears everytime Severus appeared. *sniff* god your portrayal of him was brilliant and Harry's interaction with him, the way it was like the healing of a bleeding wound so deep we were not even aware of it's existence until it someone jabbed their fangs in it... My god I LOVED ITSorry I'm not making much sense but really this. This was truly magical and I love you for giving it to us.Plus, you know. Gordon.

iamtheprophet_chuck

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I think 'consoling the one man band' has got to be the best euphemism for masturbation I've ever heard. Fantastic fic. Don't mind me as I creepy stalk all your Drarry fics. You're fantastic.

mal85

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Damn!! I love ur style... U are so funny.. N sexy.. N it was all kinds of hot n exciting n new and all just really amazing n im having a fantastic time reading this.. Thank you. You are extremely talented.. Hugs...!!

Chapter 1

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This is so awesome.

fujoshicultivator

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Oh my fucking god, this!!! First, Snape - I was so excited I nearly jumped in my seat. You put a lot of funny moments in there. Loving this first chapter!!

Shewhxmustnxtbenamed

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I love this fic so much! It has to be one of my favorites, thank you for writing it!

Chapter 1

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"Harry sat in his big gay chair with his pounding gay heart and what was left of his throbbing gay erection, and it was all so bloody clear, he didn't know whether to feel immensely relieved or scared out of his mind"LOL. That cracks me up.

Augustus_Featherwing

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Oh my Merlin. What am I doing? What am I even reading?This is AMAZING!

likeyouwannabeloved

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I can't even tell you how much I love this! I have loved everything of yours I've read so far, but this is one of the ones that I will come back and re-read over and over (oh, who am I kidding, I'm going to re-read it ALL because reasons). It's sexy, sweet, funny - just everything one could want in a story. Thank you for sharing!

nhrc

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I would divide the chapter to two or three chapters because it was really long and I little lost focus. other than that, up to now it's very pleasant.

Geneva

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So glad you mentioned this on your LJ - I've been enjoying it so much. The drunken Harry in Hogsmeade was brilliant, one of the best I've read. His thoughts just veered around from topic to topic. Harry's whole mind / attitude / humor is absolutely perfect. I love his obsession with Malfoy - it's so lighthearted and irresistible. Looking forward to more.

Scarletfiction

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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMGGGGGGG THAT PROFESSOR SNAPE MOMENT, THEIR CHEMISTRY IS SO HOT AND NOTHING HAS HAPPENED YET OMG WE NEED MORE GORDON

Sarah_94

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Those two are adorable lolSnape the portrait giving lessons..that I didn't see.The sexual tension was skyrocketing.Great chapter :)

sluttysuperheroes

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Oh my god!!! This is honest to god the best drarry fic I've ever read. It was so touching and really funny and plausible anskisksksjsjsjksI just want to know what happens afterwards!! Because it seems like it would be hard for them to stay together with Harry at Hogwarts and Draco playing quidditch professionally. Either way, I fucking adore this fic! I am drowning in feels right now :'D

flusen

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Oh my god I like these sudden twists in the typical tropes. Like, being up in the same dorms wasn't done. Draco being all aggressive and a dick wasn't done, instead he was sort of passive and like moving on with his life. Not really instigating things. It's a nice change. Anyway, I'm really enjoying this!

Platycakes

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"Well!" Harry interrupted Hermione's thesis statement on broom gender identification. "If I don't get a new robe, I'm going to be stuck in one that looks like a mini-skirt, so… Meet you to get our books in an hour?"This whole paragraph. Omfg x'DGod yes I love the steady streams eyesex going on.Jfc the tension is electric"Breakfast, however, was delicious and erection-free. "Never in my life did I think I'd be reading these words x'D"The chair slammed into the wall behind him and broke into pieces, and both Neville and Hannah Abbot screamed a little."Omfg hot grown up neville screaming in fright x'DOmg. Drunk Harry's rationalizations are adorable and hilarious :'D"She swung his arm to and fro like they were old childhood friends. Malfoy's elbow banged into the chair arm with every pass, but Luna seemed not to mind."LOL luna is adorable and and could probably convince anyone to do anything is she bemused them enough Holy fuck that twister game... with the breathing and the panting and the shifting and exposing of necks was just...*fans self*"She's some kind of sexual… camel or something."OH WOW. RON XDDD"Harry tried to conceal how exciting it was to be openly talking about their penises."You are killing me. I love the way you phrase things. You have a beautiful mind

liminalweirdo

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This is one of my favourite things I've ever read. I love this.

chocolateandboys

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Oh my gosh Ron and Harry talking about him getting murdered in his sleep is one of my favorite things XD "see you in the afterlife" lolololol

chocolateandboys

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"“Harry sat in his big gay chair with his pounding gay heart and what was left of his throbbing gay erection” “Harry was completely preoccupied the whole next day with his being gay and all.” omg I'm dying XD

chocolateandboys

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I legit cannot handle how funny this is!

turbulenthandholding

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I so enjoyed this first chapter. Their chemistry is amazing. Thank you!!

Chapter 1

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"Harry tried to conceal how exciting it was to be openly talking about their penises."This is such a fantastic line! I literally cackled and immediately texted my friend.Loved the tone and the set up here. Well done!

cerebral_thunder

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I don't think I've laughed harder in my life, than I have reading this. Oh my goodness, your writing style kills me. :) You're fantastic.

gksh95d

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"Harry was completely preoccupied the whole next day with his being gay and all." I don't know if a more perfect sentence has ever been written.

CapricornBookworm

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THIS WAS SO FANTASTIC. This made me smile, laugh, and tear up a bit. I read this all in one sitting and it was amazing. Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic. This was so well-written and truly a joy to read. I just can't praise it enough.

bottseveryflavorbeans

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I love you. This fic is literally the best and so well written and MY GOD MY HEART. It was paced out so well and it was so detailed and I was soooooooo involved in all the characters. The first kiss was electric and I know I'm gushing currently but you are like my favorite person right now. Okay, I'll shut up now.

Tessaru

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Ned-the-Hufflepuff, best oc ever. Cracks me up every time they refer to the poor guy,haha. Loved this chapter, starting on the next one right away!

RiverMelody

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HIS DICK CHIMED IN WTF OML

malfxy

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If I'm being completely honest, this is my favorite Drarry fic. Ever.

Chapter 1

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This is a bloody good fic! I started reading this quite late and am still up, having spent the last few hours laughing to myself like an idiot. The characters are well developed but remain true to themselves. Wow

tiredly

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broooo I'm already SO INTO THIS GODDAMN FANFIC and it's only been a chapter. I think I'm in love. And Jesus Christ, speaking of love, look at these two ACTIVELY DISCUSSING THE HARD ONS THEY GOT FOR EACH OTHER in the middle of the common room. Those fuckers are thirsty as shit. Especially Harry, he's giving me flashbacks from when I had a middle school crush and I kept looking at him in class, then looking away quickly when she noticed. The only difference is that Harry is a grown ass adult who has defeated a physchotic mass murderer and won a war. How is he even functioning?

NinaMariiee

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My favorite parts so far!!"That, even though Harry had not purchased the offending ferret and had left the Magical Menagerie animal-less, Gordon – who had then been unnamed – snuck into the car and stowed away under Harry's passenger seat, scaring the bloody hell out of him when they arrived back at Grimmauld.""Harry shared looks with Hermione and Ron and then turned his stunned attention back to Snape's portrait, which went on as if he'd never died and was standing there in the flesh.""Harry sat in his big gay chair with his pounding gay heart and what was left of his throbbing gay erection, and it was all so bloody clear, he didn't know whether to feel immensely relieved or scared out of his mind.""Because he wasn't just gay. He was gay for Malfoy. And that was a whole new level of acceptance.""Is this you making conversation? Because I can do better. How's the erection, Potter?" "Not bad, Malfoy. How's yours?" Harry tried to conceal how exciting it was to be openly talking about their penises.

Redsparkletea

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The ending of this chapter! XD

Duchess_of_Strumpetness

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OMG your snarky Harry is the best, some awesome lines.