Harry Potter and the Power of Inheritance

Wonderful story so far! Please could you try and write some more to this story.Thank you in advance,--- Mark A Heffron ( Plymouth, UK ) ---

Such a shame this never continued it's very good! but a bit strange why would hermione suddenly kiss him?

that went from 0 to fucked up immediately

What’s the disgusting fascination with slaves? Dude, you need psychological help.

I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Excellent way to introduce his kitten and slave into the new lives.I am now looking forward to seeing Harry's girls brought into the collection.Please could you try and write the next chapter as soon as you can.Thank you in advance.Mark A Heffron ( Plymouth, UK )

Is there a chance that you will update sooner or later?

I thought the writing was wonderful, but the details leave a lot to be desired.Firstly, making Harry some kind of amazingly powerful almost-demigod really takes a lot of the fun and realism out of the tale. What can't he overcome with a simple swipe of his wand? What enemies would he tread lightly around, unsure of his ability to win, when he knows that he's got so many innate abilities?Secondly, taking Ginny as a slave, especially in such a mean, vindictive way. According to the story, that just doesn't make any sense since even the Goblins acknowledged how Ginny was unlikely to have been planning anything. If there was a bad actor involved, it would have been her mother, not Ginny. At worst, you could say that Ginny fell for the constant lessons she was taught from the moment of her birth -- force fed to her by Molly. How could Ginny defend against that when she wouldn't have seen it as wrong in the first place? Why is she being treated poorly by Harry when she was as much a victim as Harry was? Why would Harry be mad at Ginny rather than understanding since he was also in a bad home situation and often had to do things he didn't necessarily want to?Sure, he might have been upset that Ginny was involved at all, but nothing in the narrative indicates that he has knowledge of Ginny being duplicitous, hateful, conniving, etc. She was only acting out the abusive orders she got from Dumbledore and Molly, two authority figures who undoubtedly had been training her from birth.Of course, maybe that's an issue that can be addressed in future chapters -- Harry realizing he had acted without thinking and has been abusing Ginny. This causes him quite a bit of turmoil since he knows all too well how it feels to be abused. I'd like to see the look on his face when Ginny says, "The Dursley's taught you well!", as he's mistreating her. The shock and horror as he realizes that he's not being any better than Vernon....So, yea, enjoyable and worth continuing.

Great story please continue

You need to get a mental evaluation, see a shrink or something. Why the hell would Harry or Hermione condone let alone actually participate in rape? You would have to butcher and change the characters to a point they wouldn’t even be Harry or Hermione any more. Another thing is they have zero reason to actually treat Ginny like this. For all Harry knows Ginny could be completely innocent in all of it.

Please continue this.

Please update.

Hermione called Harry master why?

Now that's a Harry Potter in control! I can't wait tot see what you come up with to humiliate Fumblewhore! I mean, what with everything he's done to Harry's family and self over the years, anything, and I do mean anything, he does to the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder is acceptable to me! Now I've never read any of the canon books but if what I've heard is true, then he is directly responsible for the deaths of James and Lily Potter. Supposedly Snape came to him and told him Riddle would attack the Potters and he sat on his bony ass and did nothing about it. Thus if that's true, he is totally responsible for their murder. Obviously he should be brought on charges for it but as he runs the government I really don't see it ever happening. So Harry'll have to do something to humiliate and punish the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder. I am eagerly awaiting an update for this.

I think I've read this before but I'm not sure. Though, I did enjoy it. I can't wait to read whatever comes next! I imagine that the Goblins are going to be taking out their displeasure for all that Harry's been through on Fumblemort. I'm just as sure the Wessleys will be begging Harry to free Ginny soon as they find out where he is living. I really can't see Harry returning to the Dursldy's after finding out how much he's worth. Though you would loose if you were to bet that Fumblemort won't demand he do just that! Anywho, I'll eagerly await your next posting. And thanks for posting this.

This is so good i dont get why you are the first to think of the Neko catgirl hermione idea it's brilliant

Are you still going to continue this? Please please please please please please please please please please please please please continue this story

Please continue its a great story

Can't wait for more

can't wait to see what happens next!

Hi

this is interesting i think will it be continued?

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

That was simply the best. I hate Ginny's character as she simply forces herself onto Harry, due to the love potion her mother made for her.I am looking forward to the next exciting chapter - please update soon.-Mark.

I wish Harry had interrogated Ginny just a bit first to see if she was as guilty as she seemed. At this point in the story it could have been Molly or Dumb-as-a-door pulling the strings. He could have summoned her and bound her to him as a slave and ordered her to tell him the truth, then everything he did to her is fair game.Besides that, great job. Please keep it up (pun intended :).

Please update. Loving this! Kitty---awesome!

Man, this is so dark..

would love some more please

hope to see more

please update

I tried to read this story. I really did but this is a bunch of bullshit. The over powered harry i could tolerate, hell you aren't the first to do it and you sadly wont be the last. But Hermione calling harry master?? Shit just uther shit. She has saved his ass to many times for her to call him that also if they ate "soul bonded" it means they are married right? Why is she submissive? Why is she not his EQUAL. Smh fuck this. This horrid story should have been a smut

Well, now, that's a good punishment for Ginny, so far. I wonder how roughly Harry is going to take her ass?It should be quite interesting to see how he and his lady interact and develop relationships with the other witches mentioned. I hope the others are all open-minded, they are going to need to be, as well as bi-, to really enjoy being part of this extended household. If everyone is together, that's going to be quite the intense orgy and I'm sure Harry will treat all but Ginny with proper care/concern; Ginevra has earned her low position and I hope it fills her mother with bitterness when Molly finds out.

When you have a chance add more chapters

Can you update soon please thank you

Great story so far, I can't wait to see where you take it from here.

*whistles* Well, that's one way to break them in. What should be interesting is to interrogate Ginny and find out just how much she knows about plots against Harry, preferably a somewhat BDSM interrogation.

more?

Nice. More please

Was the new aggressive personality from the: soul fragment; reaction from being manipulated so badly; finally being over come by his upbring; the betrayal by some; some aspect of his inheritance or a combination of a few if not all ? Hopefully there will be more to this story to answer this and other questions.

Love the story! Looking forward to where it goes from here! Keep up the good work.

Really nice story... Hope it continues.

More please

Please continue this story, I am enjoying it so far.

999 Billion Galleons? The entire economy of the tiny wizarding world isn't that big.

Wtf House of Cristo? Are you trying to make Harry a deity? The decendant of Jesus?

The Powerful Harry tag definitely makes sense now…Stories kinda ridiculous but i find it a bit amusing

And what is Diablo?

More cliche powers for no reason

I'm not fond of the cliche of making Harry beyond simply wealthy and instead having him he the absolute wealthiest Britton around But I'll give this a shot

I HATE YOU ,DURSLEYS!Not you,author-san.You're very good.

I just want to say how much I love Hedwig And I like your story also even though the chapters are short and I'm afraid that this won't be continues it has potential and It is Well written I employ you to continue as soon as possible

Good so far, hope to see more soon.

I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Is there a chance that you will update sooner or later?

Excellent way to introduce his kitten and slave into the new lives.I am now looking forward to seeing Harry's girls brought into the collection.Please could you try and write the next chapter as soon as you can.Thank you in advance.Mark A Heffron ( Plymouth, UK )

What’s the disgusting fascination with slaves? Dude, you need psychological help.

that went from 0 to fucked up immediately

You need to get a mental evaluation, see a shrink or something. Why the hell would Harry or Hermione condone let alone actually participate in rape? You would have to butcher and change the characters to a point they wouldn’t even be Harry or Hermione any more. Another thing is they have zero reason to actually treat Ginny like this. For all Harry knows Ginny could be completely innocent in all of it.

Wonderful story so far! Please could you try and write some more to this story.Thank you in advance,--- Mark A Heffron ( Plymouth, UK ) ---

Such a shame this never continued it's very good! but a bit strange why would hermione suddenly kiss him?

Great story please continue

Please continue this.

I thought the writing was wonderful, but the details leave a lot to be desired.Firstly, making Harry some kind of amazingly powerful almost-demigod really takes a lot of the fun and realism out of the tale. What can't he overcome with a simple swipe of his wand? What enemies would he tread lightly around, unsure of his ability to win, when he knows that he's got so many innate abilities?Secondly, taking Ginny as a slave, especially in such a mean, vindictive way. According to the story, that just doesn't make any sense since even the Goblins acknowledged how Ginny was unlikely to have been planning anything. If there was a bad actor involved, it would have been her mother, not Ginny. At worst, you could say that Ginny fell for the constant lessons she was taught from the moment of her birth -- force fed to her by Molly. How could Ginny defend against that when she wouldn't have seen it as wrong in the first place? Why is she being treated poorly by Harry when she was as much a victim as Harry was? Why would Harry be mad at Ginny rather than understanding since he was also in a bad home situation and often had to do things he didn't necessarily want to?Sure, he might have been upset that Ginny was involved at all, but nothing in the narrative indicates that he has knowledge of Ginny being duplicitous, hateful, conniving, etc. She was only acting out the abusive orders she got from Dumbledore and Molly, two authority figures who undoubtedly had been training her from birth.Of course, maybe that's an issue that can be addressed in future chapters -- Harry realizing he had acted without thinking and has been abusing Ginny. This causes him quite a bit of turmoil since he knows all too well how it feels to be abused. I'd like to see the look on his face when Ginny says, "The Dursley's taught you well!", as he's mistreating her. The shock and horror as he realizes that he's not being any better than Vernon....So, yea, enjoyable and worth continuing.

Please update.

Please continue its a great story

I think I've read this before but I'm not sure. Though, I did enjoy it. I can't wait to read whatever comes next! I imagine that the Goblins are going to be taking out their displeasure for all that Harry's been through on Fumblemort. I'm just as sure the Wessleys will be begging Harry to free Ginny soon as they find out where he is living. I really can't see Harry returning to the Dursldy's after finding out how much he's worth. Though you would loose if you were to bet that Fumblemort won't demand he do just that! Anywho, I'll eagerly await your next posting. And thanks for posting this.

This is so good i dont get why you are the first to think of the Neko catgirl hermione idea it's brilliant

Are you still going to continue this? Please please please please please please please please please please please please please continue this story

Hermione called Harry master why?

Now that's a Harry Potter in control! I can't wait tot see what you come up with to humiliate Fumblewhore! I mean, what with everything he's done to Harry's family and self over the years, anything, and I do mean anything, he does to the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder is acceptable to me! Now I've never read any of the canon books but if what I've heard is true, then he is directly responsible for the deaths of James and Lily Potter. Supposedly Snape came to him and told him Riddle would attack the Potters and he sat on his bony ass and did nothing about it. Thus if that's true, he is totally responsible for their murder. Obviously he should be brought on charges for it but as he runs the government I really don't see it ever happening. So Harry'll have to do something to humiliate and punish the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder. I am eagerly awaiting an update for this.

Can't wait for more

Hi

this is interesting i think will it be continued?

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

That was simply the best. I hate Ginny's character as she simply forces herself onto Harry, due to the love potion her mother made for her.I am looking forward to the next exciting chapter - please update soon.-Mark.

I wish Harry had interrogated Ginny just a bit first to see if she was as guilty as she seemed. At this point in the story it could have been Molly or Dumb-as-a-door pulling the strings. He could have summoned her and bound her to him as a slave and ordered her to tell him the truth, then everything he did to her is fair game.Besides that, great job. Please keep it up (pun intended :).

would love some more please

can't wait to see what happens next!

Please update. Loving this! Kitty---awesome!

Man, this is so dark..

hope to see more

please update

I tried to read this story. I really did but this is a bunch of bullshit. The over powered harry i could tolerate, hell you aren't the first to do it and you sadly wont be the last. But Hermione calling harry master?? Shit just uther shit. She has saved his ass to many times for her to call him that also if they ate "soul bonded" it means they are married right? Why is she submissive? Why is she not his EQUAL. Smh fuck this. This horrid story should have been a smut

When you have a chance add more chapters

Great story so far, I can't wait to see where you take it from here.

Well, now, that's a good punishment for Ginny, so far. I wonder how roughly Harry is going to take her ass?It should be quite interesting to see how he and his lady interact and develop relationships with the other witches mentioned. I hope the others are all open-minded, they are going to need to be, as well as bi-, to really enjoy being part of this extended household. If everyone is together, that's going to be quite the intense orgy and I'm sure Harry will treat all but Ginny with proper care/concern; Ginevra has earned her low position and I hope it fills her mother with bitterness when Molly finds out.

Love the story! Looking forward to where it goes from here! Keep up the good work.

Really nice story... Hope it continues.

Nice. More please

*whistles* Well, that's one way to break them in. What should be interesting is to interrogate Ginny and find out just how much she knows about plots against Harry, preferably a somewhat BDSM interrogation.

Can you update soon please thank you

Was the new aggressive personality from the: soul fragment; reaction from being manipulated so badly; finally being over come by his upbring; the betrayal by some; some aspect of his inheritance or a combination of a few if not all ? Hopefully there will be more to this story to answer this and other questions.

The Powerful Harry tag definitely makes sense now…Stories kinda ridiculous but i find it a bit amusing

more?

Please continue this story, I am enjoying it so far.

More please

999 Billion Galleons? The entire economy of the tiny wizarding world isn't that big.

And what is Diablo?

I just want to say how much I love Hedwig And I like your story also even though the chapters are short and I'm afraid that this won't be continues it has potential and It is Well written I employ you to continue as soon as possible

Wtf House of Cristo? Are you trying to make Harry a deity? The decendant of Jesus?

More cliche powers for no reason

Good so far, hope to see more soon.

I'm not fond of the cliche of making Harry beyond simply wealthy and instead having him he the absolute wealthiest Britton around But I'll give this a shot

I HATE YOU ,DURSLEYS!Not you,author-san.You're very good.