Smell of Submission

This was quite fun. Always hated Cormac.

a great ending to part 1. Harry is very dominant man with his order and his girls.

I thought this was a great story! I would've expected Harry to struggle a bit more in the beginning with the wand hostler thing and struggling with the concept of dominance and submission but then that's me! The rest of the story was really good and I thoroughly enjoyed it! I liked how you balanced the dark and light and that the dark is not necessary evil. Nice! Hoping that you will write more of this! Thank you for sharing! :)

This was super intense. Not just the smut but so much plot going on. I really need to see what happens next.

Well fuck that's some hot kinky fuckery.

Any idea when we can expect the next part of this delightfully deviant journey?

The rom com ending we all needed and wanted! Thank Merlin there's a sequel

Really looking forward to part 2 of the series.

A good story, I quite enjoyed it, thanks for writing it. I enjoyed how Harry learns to be a good master through his slaves and pets, that he's really working to get them what they want, what they desire, so that they're truly happy. I feel this is partly why he let Hermione go - he knew that was what was right for her at the time, that she would be happier. Of course, there's obviously still a lot of work that needs to be donethere but ythey're off to a great start, and it should be easier from here on out, I think. I will say I find it odd we see so little of Daphne - given she was practically first, and she's going to be Harry's Dark Consort (nominally Hermione's equal, though not actually, since Hermione is also his Treasure). I mean, we saw more of Tracey than of Daphne, and all her training has consisted of so far has been being given some orders and punished... I hope Harry gets more serious about it, since otherwise he'd just be lying to her, and it's problematic enough that she'll never actually be Hermione's equal.Great story, can't wait for more!

I love that Harry, Draco, and Hermione were the only ones to get the potion right, and had the smarts to enlarge it.

this is an amazing story (fanfiction? idk whatever) I can't wait to see where it goes!

Is there more to the story cause I feel like it’s unfinished ?

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I am liking this story more than I should...

GINNY/SEV! That was adorable?? and oh Astoria, I'm worried too! I can't wait to see what he does to protect her.

Luv this story so far. Kudos to you on every chapter :)

I'm so annoyed with Hermione, which means I've definitely bought in! I didn't realize it had only been a month?? School stars in the fall, so they can't. have been at school that long. It's growing so fast! I'm actually really loving the Severus/ Ginny storyline. That's a great dynamic. I hope we get to see more and more of them.

Oh yes! All the alliances with Malfoy please.

An alliance with malfoy?! I like where this is going!

Why doesn't this story have the cuckold tag or at least something like swinging

This is a wonderful parody of those crappy bad sex harem fics. The way you make fun of the entire concept is very subtle but still manages to carry across just how goofy and childish they are.Great job.

Oh man. Looks like Harry’s hypnotist thing worked and Hermione is now entertaining dark fantasies. I kinda feel bad for Ginny. She was just sitting there in a daze!

Krum...

Well, damn. Harry sure is a schemer!

Great Chapter! Update soon :D

Oh!Color me intrigued. I like a Harry who takes charge. Can’t wait to read more!

Eep! I’m blushing just as much as Hermione...

Did she just inadvertently give Harry a cursed gift??

please post a second part this was soo good i started reading it at 2 pm its 12:30 am i just finished it i could not put it down

This was quite fun. Always hated Cormac.

The rom com ending we all needed and wanted! Thank Merlin there's a sequel

This was super intense. Not just the smut but so much plot going on. I really need to see what happens next.

Really looking forward to part 2 of the series.

Any idea when we can expect the next part of this delightfully deviant journey?

a great ending to part 1. Harry is very dominant man with his order and his girls.

Well fuck that's some hot kinky fuckery.

I thought this was a great story! I would've expected Harry to struggle a bit more in the beginning with the wand hostler thing and struggling with the concept of dominance and submission but then that's me! The rest of the story was really good and I thoroughly enjoyed it! I liked how you balanced the dark and light and that the dark is not necessary evil. Nice! Hoping that you will write more of this! Thank you for sharing! :)

A good story, I quite enjoyed it, thanks for writing it. I enjoyed how Harry learns to be a good master through his slaves and pets, that he's really working to get them what they want, what they desire, so that they're truly happy. I feel this is partly why he let Hermione go - he knew that was what was right for her at the time, that she would be happier. Of course, there's obviously still a lot of work that needs to be donethere but ythey're off to a great start, and it should be easier from here on out, I think. I will say I find it odd we see so little of Daphne - given she was practically first, and she's going to be Harry's Dark Consort (nominally Hermione's equal, though not actually, since Hermione is also his Treasure). I mean, we saw more of Tracey than of Daphne, and all her training has consisted of so far has been being given some orders and punished... I hope Harry gets more serious about it, since otherwise he'd just be lying to her, and it's problematic enough that she'll never actually be Hermione's equal.Great story, can't wait for more!

this is an amazing story (fanfiction? idk whatever) I can't wait to see where it goes!

I'm so annoyed with Hermione, which means I've definitely bought in! I didn't realize it had only been a month?? School stars in the fall, so they can't. have been at school that long. It's growing so fast! I'm actually really loving the Severus/ Ginny storyline. That's a great dynamic. I hope we get to see more and more of them.

Luv this story so far. Kudos to you on every chapter :)

GINNY/SEV! That was adorable?? and oh Astoria, I'm worried too! I can't wait to see what he does to protect her.

Is there more to the story cause I feel like it’s unfinished ?

I

I love that Harry, Draco, and Hermione were the only ones to get the potion right, and had the smarts to enlarge it.

An alliance with malfoy?! I like where this is going!

Great Chapter! Update soon :D

Oh man. Looks like Harry’s hypnotist thing worked and Hermione is now entertaining dark fantasies. I kinda feel bad for Ginny. She was just sitting there in a daze!

Oh yes! All the alliances with Malfoy please.

Why doesn't this story have the cuckold tag or at least something like swinging

This is a wonderful parody of those crappy bad sex harem fics. The way you make fun of the entire concept is very subtle but still manages to carry across just how goofy and childish they are.Great job.

I am liking this story more than I should...

Oh!Color me intrigued. I like a Harry who takes charge. Can’t wait to read more!

please post a second part this was soo good i started reading it at 2 pm its 12:30 am i just finished it i could not put it down

Well, damn. Harry sure is a schemer!

Krum...

Eep! I’m blushing just as much as Hermione...

Did she just inadvertently give Harry a cursed gift??