oh my goodness!! i love this so much! i love how the characters interact it's, soooo good (especially in the first part, i kinda just stopped for a second and went "... wow. they're really good at writing." like. the way the characters interact quickly and easily sets up a tON of background we can infer and it's. hhhgfhfhjf that's the kind of writing skill i Wanna Get)
Love this! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
artlessclaybrainedflapdragon
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This is so good I can’t wait to read more!!!!!!
You know, what's unique about your story, is that you point out that even the teacher doesn't believe the internship. Most stories the teachers are indifferent or if they don't believe, it wasn't the focus point. But you emphasize on it. It's refreshing. That said, I can't wait to see how the school trip/revelation went. I know they're going to be shock... But I think the lot of them need to realise what and how they treat Peter was wrong. I wish they feel guilty, like extremely guilty. Finding out that Peter wasn't lying should be a huge slap in their faces. Please make this happen. Little Pete needs the hugs and justice! (Besides Tony Stark, can we have caring and overprotective SI employees?)Keep up the great work!
So Maggie is my new favorite person ever
This is really good! I love a good field trip cliche but find they are often very simple and basically identical to each other. This one has a lot more detail and you have made the cliche's more unique. Also, I love how Peter actually has feelings about being bullied because normally he just ignores it which is so unrealistic. But yeah, I can't wait for the update. A suggestion I have for towards the end is Tony taking proper action against the teacher for claiming Peter was lying. Like not being threatened or fired but made to give a proper apology and maybe the school gets in trouble because surely they'd have been told by some authority figure that Peter does have an internship which makes him miss school??? Just suggestions but it would be a nice touch to tie up lose ends
I hope tony also goes after the teacher
I love this. I love this so much!!!
"Oh. I know all about high school" B E S T. L I N E. E V E R.
This is insanely good. What the heck?! I loved it so much. Merci for sharing.
This has got to be my FAVORITE fix of this area. So glad to have found it again.
The whole scene with Flash was a bit cringe, I get not wanting to suddenly show his new strength that he shouldn't have...but to let important papers get trashed was just patetic, all the more when you think about how easily Peter could have avoided them being grabbed it in the first place.
shit wait is this the one where tony has a panic attack at the end and decides to send peter to college early
I love Maggie, so much. She's my new favorite person.
Bro school doesn't give two shits about bullies. They put up posters but that's it. School sucks.
Oooooh, I'm very mad at Peter's teacherI can't wait to see the look on his face when he finds out Peter actually *does* have an internship
Oh my getting good thank you
K anyways stan Maggie for clear skin
I’m in love with the characterisation
ut oh! Well at least maggie has his back
well_Nobody_knows
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we stan three (3) queens(Pepper Potts, MJ, Maggie)
GiveFandralHisThighHighs
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Rip Flash he will not be missed
sleepingintherain
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YESSSS GO MAGGIE
Just a Spade casually dropping by ♠️💚
Omg. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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I’m so glad Maggie is in his side!
Too true, too many schools turn a blind eye to bullying, let the kids sort it out themselves, it's just kids being kids, until something serious happens and they are all we are sorry, we will do better next time. Tell that to the parents of the kid who is seriously injured or dead!.Sorry for the rant, climbing down off soap box now!
I'm a little confused about some of the dialogs between Peter and Maggie in the first scene, but overall liking what you are doing.
Me: "...The Smoll Bean has been hurt. Someone. Must. DIE!"Inner Voice: "His bully is underage."Me: "TCH! ...Fine. Then we go for the parents and faculty! JUSTICEEEEEEE~!!!"
We all need a magie in our lives
Peter .” Maggie said his name with a dangerous edge, “If you don’t tell Dr. Stark yourself, I will find a way to contact him and tell him myself, I don’t do bullies okay?”Peter nodded.If only his school felt that way.This is so true!!!!!I love this a lot!!!!!
Aww, Peter...I was recommended this and I'm so happy for that fact 😌 cannot WAIT to see Flash's face when he realises the internship is real!
OttoTheNonbinaryOtter
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Yesss im loving Maggie!!!
LitaliCat_and_MayaniLife
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Maggie is awesome 👌 👏
Almighty_Melon_Lord
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💙💙💙
Communism doesn’t work
Underrated line, 10/10, kudos and comments just for that. But the story is good too :)
Oh FUCK flash, fuck the guy absolutely FUCK HIM. Someone PLEASE give flash a major fucking yelling at please i beg you
I can't wait until Tony sticks his nose in. It's going to be fantastical, I can tell.
Oh My God!I'm just waiting for Tony to find out what happened to his kid, like its going to rain hell in that bitch flash, and all those shity teachers.Seriously, Tony Fucking Stark is going to blow a gasket when he finds out, nobody treats his kid like that.
I never knew how much I needed this.
Very strong start. I love how you flesh out the employees.I wish you could have Natasha because her and Peter are my favorites. But from the sounds of it they are still persona non grata.However I think I like the dr slinds the best.What face... oh my god that was great I actually loled at that.Can't wait to read the rest.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I need Flash to get his comeuppance and hopefully via May and Tony.