on temporizing
by LuckyMagicBelle
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Summary
Tommy and Dream are trapped in a time loop.What do they do? Mess with everyone else, of course. русский translation by kuwwizz here!
Reader Reviews
Chapter 1
2 months agoHoly shit these two are so chaotic-
FredrickthePig
2 months ago<3
LegendOfKat
2 months ago(good thing I have the series bookmarked or i might have missed this)this was actually hilarious!!!! jjust the fic i needed to cheer me up today, the heatwave's been interacting horribly with my diabetes :( i love tommy and dream fucking around with everybody tho, its the fic i didnt even know i wanted but fills me with joy on reading it (as is the case with the rest of your fics)... lovely as always!!!!
OnPlanetMars
2 months agoLuv it :D
Trytokillmeorsomething123
2 months agoHow about a loop where Dream and Tommy trying to recreate Tangled?Oh oh! How bout one where Dream keep trying to adopt Tommy???
Eruru18
2 months agoGod this is hilarious! please continued this, dream and tommy's friendship are underated i need more of them :(
JJ_Rays
2 months agoTommy glitter bombed L'manburg..That is amazing.
Starshifting
2 months agoI can imagine Dream and Tommy crashing the Red Banquet like "ayup bitches"
teacupi
2 months ago❤️❤️❤️
Coreina
2 months agoAyo this is funny
WhoopsieCollective
2 months agoYES TIME LOOP
Chapter 1
2 months agoGod I love the concept of Dream and Tommy just causing chaos together, something about it just gets my neurons firing.
Merkisthename
2 months agoI'm getting the vague feeling that Tommy annoyed Dream to the point that he became a (somewhat? Or just not as obsessed with control) decent fellow again.This was hysterical and I loved it :D
GordieGord
2 months agoLMAOOOO I LOVE THIS <33333
booping_the_snoot
2 months agoOH MY GOOOD PLEASSEEEE THIS IS SO GOOD
Lynx_LifeSeries
2 months agoI love this series and all the books in it ❤️
fribbles
2 months agothis fic gives me comfort so much i love it <3
Giggle123
2 months agoLmao in the summary I somehow misread "Tommy" as "Techno" so I was kinda confused before i went back and reread XDIts hilarious how they come back at i consistent times so things like the last loop we saw happens XD
drfirefly08
2 months agoayo ayo im just imagining this scene with dream and tommy"aye dream let me get exiled again so we can actually be lads on tour"then dream and tommy just vibes and create an entire empire or somethingand when tubbo visits" HOW IN THE WORLD DID YOU TWO MAKE A FUCKING EMPIRE IN ONE WEEK?!"and i just think it's hilarious (also you may absolutely use this idea for a part two if you want
Mixy_ttwara
2 months agoThe glitter part absolutely destroyed me XDDDI have some ideas if you decide to continue this, you can use them if you want :DDream and Tommy getting and elytra and since they don't wanna take turns with it they just piggyback and soar the skiesDream and Tommy stopping Techno from spawning the withers by taking the last skulls from him (chasing scene with "benny hill" in the background lmao)Tommy getting exiled on purpose so he and Dream can play pranks on L'Manberg without anyone suspecting themDream and Tommy filling Eret's castle with mistletoesDream and Tommy making a dancing competition in Techno's basementDream and Tommy in prison fighting for the custody of PussboyDream and Tommy singing (yelling) to XD to the top of their lungs until the god just mutes themDream and Tommy making a cosplay as their friends competition and acting as if it's normal when anyone asks them
WhoopsieCollective
2 months agoOkay what if dream and Tommy vibed with enderwalk ranboo
TheShadowOne777
2 months agoThis is great!!You could add some hurt/comfort into the next chapters. Like ridiculous scenarios with the characters getting hurt and unlikely enemies help each other out.
Chapter 1
2 months ago💖💖💖
freezingsunrise
2 months agoTHis is beautiful. If you wanna make an angsty one, what if you make a loop that starts in the middle of exile?
Smolevilshrimps
2 months agoOmg I love this. This is so wholesome and it made my day 😌
FoundNotLost14
2 months ago*Wheeze* Tommy you decide to join Eret in blowing up L'Manberg then spectacularly fuck up the dramatics by getting glitter in your eyes. I love this.
InsomniacCoffeeAllTheWay
2 months agoI LOVED THE ONE WHERE RANBOO AND TOMMY WENT TO THE END-HE JUST FUCKINTHAT WAS AMAZINGLITTERATLY TRICKED A GOD WITH THE "OH LOOK, OVER THERE" THINGYEEEEEEEEESAlsoqlsoalso CONSIDERWhat if they pull Michael into their chananigqnsLike for some reason tommy gets asked to baby sitAnd tells him a bunch of stories and legendsAnd things that are GOING to happenBut tells him he cant tell anyone
a_paramnesia_victim
2 months agoTHIS IS TOO FUNNYCrack scenarios with discduo are superior I love this XDXXDXD
NinjaNin
2 months agoI have been dreaming for a fic like this. It is amazing and startlingly wholesome! I love it
chizue_witchery
2 months agoWith all of the angst I've read about (c!)Dream and Tommy, this is an entire new change of mood — and I fucking love it
Chapter 1
2 months agoYo this was hilarious I had to hold back giggles thank u XD
Thingamabob_no
2 months agoi have a few prompts if you want them1.dream and tommy act like visco girls. like, they only like say like like every like second like word. and they just act really sassy and dismissive. like, someone comes up to them with something important and they just go: woah, i'm gonna have to like stop youuu... riiiight theere beeecaauuuseee youu CANNOT honestly be wearing...THAT in my presence.2.they, during a really important battle or something that they have be at, arent there so everyone else just goes around looking for them. eventually, they find them in the community house wearing make up, doing each others nails, dresses, hair nice, whatever else they could be doing3.they only talk in memes and vine references4.they talk to each other like they're master and student. y'know the young padawan thing? (however you spell it) and its really sudden, like out of nowhere. and its when tommy and dream (through their great acting) are supposed to be at each others throats5.they become gothic emos with no filter6.they just ramdonly (without signing or saying who it could be from) leave gifts out the front of and lieing around each others base. in places that you cant get to without SOMEONE noticing. and they leave them so everyone else find finds, watching the chaos unfold as people go mad trying to figure out who is leaving gift and getting into their bases. (they give them to each other, and they friends cant with the fact that they arent even slightly concerned.i hope these inspire you!! :D I love what you're doing with this, its great :)
Chapter 1
2 months agoI have read a book super simular to this...... I'm try to findit
Chapter 1
2 months agoThis is one of the best things i have every fucking seen-
Pandora_s__VALet
2 months agogbvaefjlgceqhc <3 <3 <3
TheAbysmalBard
2 months agoThis is some quality crack right here, yes siree! XD
Chapter 1
2 months agoI could hear tubbo screaming this out just as much as I could vision it happening:‘ "Tommy, please!" Tubbo screamed, tears pouring down his face. He strained forward, Eret's grip on his arms holding him back. ‘It’s feels as real as history. 。゚(゚´Д`゚)゚。
The_Peep_Behind_The_Slaughter
2 months agoGood soup
TheDarkKitten13
2 months agoFor that 4th oneTommy really just went 'committed sins infront of god'
Berime
2 months ago<3!!!!
StarDusk_ThatOneADHDkid
2 months agoAbsolutely hilarious
AloryAngel22
2 months agoCool. Amazing. Chaotic as ever.This Fanfic is like two others (it's here in AO3, I recommend)Wanna read?1. “Here We Go Loopty Loo”, an MHA Timeloop Fanfic by Tired College Student Writing. It's kinda like this (un-chronologicalised smatterings of stories, don't worry, they have a “Chronological Loops” work and mashmeshes and stuff) but with 20 chaotic students, a tired teacher, a doofus and a child.2. “Minecraft, but we're stuck in a time loop” by Sunset_Vib3s. Same with this one, but add Tubbo to the Disc Duo. There's an epilogue and other stuff published. This is actually what brought me to this work. Amazing, right? So this is what shameless promotion feels like...
InkFilledAria
2 months agoI love this so much for unknown reasons
DappleEcho
2 months agoreread time Reread counter: 1whoops. Reread counter: 2not again! Reread counter: 3owo. Reread counter: 4
quirkedandferal
2 months agowoah i thought i was logged on my account and I left a kudos:O !! i just left the 10.000th kudos!1!! what did i win :D
s0m30n3_2
2 months agoFinally, it's Friday, no more school for the rest of the week. I can start what I was planning on doing before!This fic is one of my favorites, and what do I usually do to my favorites? I reread them! Doesn't matter how long they all are, it's so worth it, plus they refresh my memories whenever things start to get hazy and hard to remember things.
Chapter 1
2 months agoDUDE I AM SO EXCITED AND HAPPY YOU UPDATED THAT I CAN BARELY SCRAMBLE THE BRAINCELLS TO READ YOUR UPDATE AAAARGH
The-Pun-Master (The_Pun_Master)
2 months agoBTW do you have a discord server?
KILSELF
2 months agoBRO IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS FIC EXISTED BUT NOW IM BACK AND IT LOOKS AS JUICY ASE EVERRRRRR
Gloomy_Terror
2 months agoOoooooh yesssssss! Time loop chaosssss!





