The Facility

Hello you, thank you for your wonderful chapter.I really enjoy your story.What a pity that I can leave kudos only once. Otherwise I would shower you in kudos :)

So I usually don’t like stories like this but.. The writing has me hooked, and I just can’t let go— It’s insanely good and though I’ve just found this story I am already dying to make fanart for it! If I do I’ll be sure to let ya know :)

That was very hot!!

Hey Callous, I know you don't normally respond to comments, but I'm hoping you respond to this one.I can't get your story out of my head - it's fantastic and I love every bit of it - and I thought it'd be fun to write something as a 'gift' to you on here (I've never used the ao3 gift system before but I bet I could figure it out)ANYWAY I don't wanna step on any toes, so if you'd rather I not write Facility fanfiction, let me know :)

Man, you have really brought us on a ride! I started reading for porn, but got hooked by the characters and plot. Honestly, gotta say I'm really rooting for the Numbers to win their freedom someday.

This is so good already I USASALLY like shorter and simple stories but your writing has me entranced cant wait to see what happens <3

Damnit I really wish there was a male version of this or maybe had some with the boy's point of view, Im already loving this but its just something I keep wishing

Well that was vile.

I loved this so much?I don't really read stories like this but it's pretty good so far tbh

Is this a remake of the first chapter?

Hot! What an exciting start. I love the second-person for keeping us in the dark.

Interesting start! Found this by just scrolling. Not sure if this is going to be my thing but the story telling style you have is compelling. I love deep dive descriptions of the environment, and character movements—this just let me SEE everything. So many questions.Thank you for sharing this with us!

This is the worst shit ever. Literally go to fucking jail!! This is illegal and I hope you burn in hell. Everyone who found this and liked it, go fucking kill yourself

"minors dni" is so stupid lmao

Hello, i just found out about this and i am absolutely IN LOVE. I can see that you havent posted since december and i hope you are doing okay. I totally understand if you are taking a break or just dont want to write this any more. But if you are reading this, remember that i will always be here and wait for a new chapter 😳💖

First thought: hell yes! I'm in for the long run!! Oh gosh 1 mil is a lot of words but I've commited! This is so my vibe, I can't find any story's like this anywhereeee

Wow, what a story!! I can't believe it took me so long to start. I thought it would just be a lot of smut without much background, but I was more than wrong. The story is really exciting. I've been devouring it for the last few days and although I still have a few chapters to go, I'm already disappointed that it's not continuing soon. I saw that you haven't updated it for a long time, but I hope that after so much effort, work and planning, you'll still continue.The individual doctors with their individual preferences, perversions and motives, and the numbers, who all have their own coping strategies - plus a completely psychopathic overseer whose motives and background are not entirely clear.... it's really creepy, interesting and exciting.Hopefully it continues soon, until then I'll probably read it a second time. English isn't my native language, so I should read it again slowly anyway, because I'm sure I've missed a few hints.Thank you for the great story!

YOOOOOO holy shit. You really do know how to keep a reader keep reading. At first I only came here due to morbid curiosity and intended to leave after skim reading because I don't usually seek out really smutty fics but DAMN you make me want to keep reading this just to find out what the fuck is going on with this organisation!! Great start, you're really good man!

Hi!! I know you most likely will not see or respond to this comment but I would like to say that this is one of my favorite writings/books. Like, ever. I’m re-reading it and find myself even more absorbed. I see you haven’t posted since 2023 and honestly hope you are well, safe and happy. This story is so good and I can only hope you will finish it someday!! Thank you so much for writing it. Wishing you the best x

okay, I know, I know, it was prefaced that medical things wouldn't be 100% accurate, but, I don't think the blood pressure reading is going to be very representative of the norm if it's taken while the MC is (understandably) beginning to panic lmao.In case it interests you CallousDegen, I stumbled onto this because I was looking for stuff tagged as second person POV, and I'm intrigued by this opener and the premise, so we'll see how long my brain decides to stick with it.

Wow. That was definitely something!Very well written.

That was so well written love it <3

Great story. But I don't understand why they would take the risk of the girls getting pregnant. Surely that just renders them useless?

Damn, that was good for me.

Wow, this is super hot 🔥

Love this story soooooo much! But is it bad my brain corrects his name to Yoke.... 🥚🍳 lmao. Can't wiat to keep reading

Ig he have a really handsome accent cause it is getting to me lol (and his appearance is just my type 😔)

This is actually so interesting, thought i was just gonna get a porn fic but this is a pleasant surprise. Not a huge fan of second person point of view but it seems befitting of the scenario here. Not to mention it complements the smut lol.

I have to agree with the other commenter. I normally don't like second person, but I'm really digging this. I came for the smut, but I'm staying for the smut and story. 97 chapters and recentish updates have me excited in so many ways. <3

I'm interested in seeing what unfolds here. Like the story or not, though, hats off to that dedication. 1.3 million words? That's just downright impressive.

I swear I’m not lying when I say I’ve become genuinely interested in the story rather than the smut. It’s left me wondering how our MC will come out of all of this, and if they will at all or simply succumb to this odd system.

this is so hot

I'm genuinely hooked - how the hell will this end?

I probably shouldn't find this as hot as I do... especially Sven and Jude 😳

That was fast

The praise is making me dizzy

Why am i attracted to this holy

Reading this chapter is an absolute nightmare. It feels so real and painful. Beautiful writing.

this is so sick omg *clicks next chapter*

So, like I'm low key hoping for some kind of fucked up relationship where Yosuke and the protagonist, but I was also kind of hoping for something with Cyrus from the last chapter. IDK what this says about me, but I'm willing to keep reading to find out.

I'm living for sweet Yosuke! Like boy he's hot, they should date.

I wanna know everything NOW 😭

Hello! I really love your fic and your writing! You said its on a first draft basis, but for a first draft I think this is amazing! Even on multiple re-reads there's not a lot of glaring errors, or at least none that I caught that would've taken me out of it. I really like the entire premise, its really fun and intriguing and while I did come for the smut the plot is interesting enough to make me excited for both smut and plot chapters. I like how ambiguously you write the reader character as I feel that some authors sometimes struggle with doing so. And seeing a reader character written ambiguously lets even someone like me become able to project myself onto that reader character. You write smut really well and I am really excited about the future visits, what kinks you will explore in them, and what will happen between Dr. Yosuke and the reader.

This story is great. You’ve tasked yourself with juggling 10 protagonists and so far you’re really making them all stand out. I honestly didn’t expect much when I clicked on this fic, but it maintains a unique tone of smutty and nightmareish. I appreciate that the main protagonist hasn’t rolled over and given in, and everyone is just enduring what they have to go through like actual victims, trying to find peace where they can, like Nine.

The fact this place has more freedom than my home 💀

Is no one gonna talk about the incest at the end there…?

Stupid bastard, he's not even going to let our protagonist have any kind of safe space >:[ And she probably can't go into the nice garden she liked anymore either because of the embarrassment of having seen the twins defile that place :/But seriously, he's responsible for her so he's the one guilty of assigning her two horrible vulgar dudes ON HER FIRST DAY. Because he gets off on BREAKING her trust and having her vulnerable, the piece of shit. He only wants a little, really??? Doing her twice is a little? After she already had to endure two people at once that day? Told her he wouldn't take her in her room and then did it anyways. What a lying dick.At least nine is cool and friendly, and eight was really nice in his own way! Blunt yes, but he warned her so she wouldn't get manipulated so easily, so I like him already! Hopefully she'll get some chocolate pudding or something soon, everybody likes chocolate pudding. Anyways, NEXT CHAPTER, I'M ROOTING FOR YOU GIRLIE

I love how she's trying to fight it but still slowly but surely giving in

Can I just say, I'm fucking loving this so far?What a clever fucking idea for a smut story! It's such a great set-up that allows endless amounts of all sorts of smut. And not only that, but you've mixed in a healthy amount of mystery, intrigue, and psychological drama, too!*chefs kiss* Its lovely, my dear. You've come up with something special, and I'm entirely excited to keep on reading 😊

not me shippinh Cyrus and Ten 😅anyway, this story is really interesting!! Smut is well writen as well as "rest" chapters! and I like characters! (I mean numbers)