Uncharted Waters

Good work can’t wait to see what happens next

Can I just say this is way too good? I'm totally eating this public vibe. best incest ever. Can their first time together be public too? Okay if not maybe second time. Will u show them as open as the other couples? Make them enjoy it to the fullest in the final day? I'm so loving it

The premise is very interesting, I like how you're building the world and characters with the debauchery flowing freely in the background. Alana's corruption is going to be really fun to watch, I hope her father resists the temptation and she's the one who instigates the change in their relationship. There's so much room for the people on this cruise to corrupt Alana; girls talking about great it is to be loved by your Daddy, girls talking about how much they can't wait until their little sisters can join them, girls who hope to be impregnated by their dads, girls who are already Mommies, girls who want to have sex with Alana's dad, and girls who are the product of generational incest (i.e. I'm daddy's little sister too, or I'm his daughter and granddaughter too.). You could even have Alana meet a older woman who she thinks is normal only to learn that she's also a daughter here with her 70 year old father. the opportunities are endless and I'm really looking forward to how Alana's view of her father will be corrupted and what actions she might take in trying to seduce him.I really hope you update quickly because thus far it's been amazing

Hope to read more of this soon.Great premise and a lot of really interesting set up for opportunities here.I wish to see you update soon.

I like this chapter !!

Really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait to read the rest & see where this goes. Hope daddy is careful confronting Sean, he wouldn't want to leave Alana unprotected on this Cruise. Thanks for the addition of the photos & for sharing your imagination,

Omg this is exactly the kind of fic I’ve been searching for. So hot and so wrong and so well written. I can’t wait to read more.

I read the description of the story and then just had to pause I’m not going to read it for the sheer simple fact that I have the same name is the female lead I just wanted to comment because I laughed

Do you have all character name index

I loved the detail, the romance and the overall cadence of this story. It's a beautiful adventure, that just kept building every step of the way. The character development, and all of the secret feeling and desires made this just so wonderful to read. Thanks for writing it!

Oh no! Why did you get rid of a bunch of your stories?? 😫🥺😭 I went back to read the ones with Daniela and her family but they are gone and a bunch of other ones are gone too? 💔

Fun idea for a story and very nice build-up -- all the father-daughter interactions Alana saw on her way to the room were hot but not so over the top to completely freak her out. Also a great build-up for readers as well!

Hi! I couldn’t find a way to contact you privately, but wanted to ask your thoughts about me binding this series into a book. It would be for personal use only, and I would only share the typeset document with your approval. Thanks in advance!

Who are the 3 people in your 2nd gif picture?

IS THAT DAPHNE AND SIMON WHAT THE HELLLLLLLLLLLLLL THIS IS SO WRONG 😭😭😭😭WHAT IS BRIDGERTON DOING HERE

This is fucking incredible 😭

1,000,000 hits! Congrats

I shouldn't love this as much as I do. Lol. I love the gifs and I like that the backstory is separate. Idk. I guess for ease of reading, i can read the backstory now or later so I like having that option. Love the update and looking forward to more

I adore stories with GIFs in them and this one is ticking all my boxes. The tension of the calender, oh my I can't wait to see what the later days are going to be like!!! I am expecting ALL the smut hehe

Was just browsing for stories with attached gifs and didn't expect to scourge this treasure. This is wicked sick! Loving the whole idea and eager to read more. You're doing a great job!

Pls continue...cant wait to see what happens next!

Good to see how poor Roger's making out -- he's got way more pressure on him than Alana has on her.

She’d been doing this for so long, too. She had to be in her early twenties. How did... ‘You wanna know how it started, huh,’ said Elodie, with undisguised glee.-wonder if were ever gonna get a crossover lmao, i still remember the "Science" experimentsElodie stared, cereal milk dripping from her spoon, as her father wandered into the kitchen completely naked..-OH- we did get a crossover form author's works 💀 still haven't read this though‘... Daniela…’-i kinda remember her? I always forget names lol

more please

are u gonna update this?

This is great. I love stories by TheOriginalSinner888 and I'm glad that person inspired you.

This was just getting good. MORE! .....please

Enjoying reading about Roger's conlicted feelings and Alana and Roger's continual amazement at how normal their fellow travelers are. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!(Noticed a small typo: Chris' name is spelled Christ near the end of the chapter.)

Hey, something’s wrong with the gifs. What happened?

There are gifs that aren't working

Oh some gifs don't work :(

Nice

This is so good. I love the GIFs that you add.Please make a Harem story of a 21 year old guy with his Mother, Sisters & eventually Daughters.Would be fantastic. Especially with your GIFs

Your usage of gifs is truly inspired 😋 especially when she's masturbating imagining all the other girls getting creamed by their fathers and crushed under their lustful bodies. I really look forward to her father tasting her allllllll over 😜

Kim and Chris might be my least favorite pairing when I read your separate fic about them 😢 she's a bully and her dad's fear is making me anxious and sad. Compared to the other girls where there was consent and affection. Anyway, I absolutely love the way you write, I could completely see this as a movie or mini series. The gifs are so 🔥🔥🔥way to override my already wild imagination!

I'm so curious to see what will be their breaking point. I absolutely love this series(Kim and her father the only exception) and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!❤️

Can't wait to read more!

Enjoying Alana and Roger's slow corruption.

Hello, I know you posted this gem a while back but I wanted to let you know several of the gifs are not working! Love your work!!

I finally found time for this series and the GIF says it's broken, which is a shame

Damn, so close.

Oh please have the finally have sex. Let it be finally to much to take and he can't hold back any more

I haven't been this excited for a fic update in a while and you didn't disappoint :) Can't wait for more!❤️

My goodness something is going to have to snap. I wonder if they are going to make it off the cruise only for things to come to a head back home.

Creo que Roger ahora estará pensando en embarazarla sin siquiera haberla follado 😏🔥🔥🔥

😏 two days left yeah

Oof. How much longer are they going to hold out? I'm guessing until the last night. And it's going to be glorious!

I would give you 1000 Kudos if I could. I so very excited to see how you top yourself with every update

Oh the suspense is killing me. ....

I love this so fucking much. I cannot wait for more chapters. This is so well written and very much captures the attention of the readers, thanks to all the suspense. And the gifs are just *chefs kiss*