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This is GOOD SHIT

wow can i just say i LOVE YOU, first of allthis! i don’t know what i was expecting when i first started reading—this premise is so unique i didn’t really know how the story would progress—but it was not this! what i got was a literal masterpiece. your writing style is simply amazing. in nearly all the cute scenes, my heart was actually fluttering, I’m so soft for the characters you’ve built. the way you developed the story, with all the scenes you chose to include, is so wonderful, this story has instantly become one of my all time favorites. ahh i am genuinely in awe of you and what you have created. i love love love this and i can’t wait to see what else you may write

wow i'm in love with this fic

Why even have kookie's people can't eat? Haha, still really original idea. Loved the development in this story. It was the cuttest shit ever!

I love suffering. Strong power thank you.

"Your lips were blue."can.you.NOT.do.this.to.meeeeNo seriously, I melted a million times while reading this, but this quote just finished me. I'm dead.It's so cute like seriously man, the first and last kiss shared between them with this fucking sentence ugh just end meI love you ♥Keep up the awesome work x') ♥

i read this at like 12am last night and had to go to sleep so i didn’t comment but now!! i have time and im planning to reread it lol. this was so good!! i loved the trope and how it was canon au too?? also the teenie tiny bit of angst was so satisfying!! your writing is incredible here and i loved this so much!!! im looking forward to ur upcoming works!!

doldkfg i spent half of bio class reading this instead of doing my work i loved it so much thank U

"Your lips were blue"...

This was soooo cute! I'm glad I decided to read it. Amazing writing!! I loved the cuddling, this fic was so heartwarming :)

u kno what?? im gonna piss my pants bc this made me CRY im so s o soft bc even the smut scenes were so tender and everyting was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good and emotionally good !!! everything seemed like there was 5324342 years of emotions built up and i feel like u were rlly aimed up for that the pining got mE SHOOK and im crying a lil im so soft the way u ended it FUCK KME SILLY

THIS WAS SO PERFECT I CANT OMG THANK YOU

OMG i really really love this fic!! canon compliant is one of my fave tropes and your twist on it was really unique and refreshing! i'm a sucker for pining and you've written them pining over each other so well, it really kept me on my toes and i couldn't stop reading it, i read it on one go! thank you for writing and sharing such a beautiful and cute fic, i enjoyed it so much! i'm now off to read your other fics :)

ahhh i love this so much!!!!! such a good read!!!

This fic was so good!!! I’m glad tae finally realized his feelings for jk ;-; your writing is amazing keep it up!!!

I just wanted to share how much I love this fic! I’ve never smiled so much, it’s just so cute and soft and I’m just in awe. I’ll be checking out more of your work and keeping a eye for more fics from you~ I hope you get all the love and kudos’!!

Omgggg that was so good, I love love loved the ending, how you connected the blue lips thing? ifjodaisfjaiofj I also really appreciated how the fortune cookie came true not by Tae confessing to Jungkook but to himself. Great amazing job, it was so easy to read and also engaging. I loved Tae's character and Jungkook was such a cutie.

That was so perfect & perfectly written, I loved it!

This,,, was more than good. This was truly amazing. The plot honestly melted my frozen heart. ♥ ((Puns aside, don't stop what you're doing, and I love your writing.~))

ANOTHER AMAZING FIC FROM YOU!!! Who woulda guessed hahaha. I’m seriously in love with the way you write these boys, it all just seems so real and accurate and genuine and just so emotional. Like Jesus Christ they’re so in love and it makes me so happy :,) thank you for blessing me (and everyone) with another beautifully written story <3ps the ending physically killed me thank u

This was so cute!

aah this was so good! i loved that it was canon compliant mixed with a fantasy (?) trope, i feel like we don't have enough of that set-up so i'm really happy that i could find a well-written fic for it.another thing that was awesome was how naturally taekook's relationship read in this story. their interactions were very nice and most of all organic. i liked how they were causal with skinship at a lot of times since as best friends who'd been knowing each other for years they were used to it. but then you didn't make them oblivious, or brush the moments that were crossing lines under that 'best friend casual' label. i liked how they were aware and frustrated in moments of attraction and when they crossed boundaries. i liked that mix of causality and awareness, you balanced that in your writing very well.i found it very cute how they were both blushing a lot around each other. that's so nice to read? how it wasn't just jungkook or just taehyung who was bashful, but both of them. to me, that seems very realistic. the gradual descend into sexual intimacy was also nicely portrayed. i loved reading how much you wrote about them kissing? kissing is one of the nicest forms of intimacy but i feel like many authors skip over it unless it's for key plot points, like the first kiss or a goodbye kiss, a kiss before sex, etc. i dunno, but i just liked reading them kissing all the time, as people who're totally in love with each other and also very touchy/affectionate, i felt it fit taekook really well.thank you writing and sharing this story!

Okay so.. THIS IS REALLY GOOD AND NICE AND SWEET AND PERFECT I LIKE IT SO FUCKING MUCHWOAHHHHH im so grateful for this fic Thanks a lot fam.. First when i read the summary i ve thought this is gonna be lots of porn, but they took all the times they had, and exploring each other step by step im literally melting from the sweetnessAcbfghhfg idk what to say anymore english isnt my native but i really am so appreciated your hardwork Thanks again dear, ill wait for more taekook from you in the futureKeep writing yeahhhh

'Your lips were blue' omygodddd!!!!

That was so cute, the last line literally got me hiding behind my hands!!! Love your work xxx

This was so good! I love how you portrayed them, it felt quite like they were the real Taehyung and Jeongguk. This is one of the few fics where I could see them IC, you know sometimes people tend to accentuate only some of their traits until the point where it feels like an exaggeration, but I never had this sensation while reading that.Jeongguk is so sweet and caring, a little shy when insecure, but you didn't forget that smug and confident part of him which comes out at times (I find that JK is the most difficult to portray usually), while Taehyung is more talkative, sweet, a bit teasy and touchy.I also loved the smut, cause it always felt so natural and full of love, without neither of them overpowering the other. And yeah, that's the kind of smut I love, and maybe I used the word "love" a bit too much. :')Anyway, bonus points for the (magic) canon compliant!Already one of my favoutites, thank you for sharing this story.

IM YELLINGGGGGGGGGG THERES SUCH A SHORTAGE OF CANON COMPLIANT FICS AND I AM SO WEAK FOR THEM. THIS WAS SO GOOD HOKT SHIT. THE SMUT. THE PINING. THE FLUFF. ALL OF IT. SO GOOD. I LOVED IT SO MUCH <333333333

this was so good i loved it

THIS IS TBE MOST CREATIVE AND MOST AMAZING ONE SHOT IVE EVER READ!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT AHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND ILY

WOW I LOVED IT *0*

THIS HAD ME SQUEALING AT 3AM AND LIKE DYING FROM THE FLUFFINESS AND THE PINING AND I ACTUALLY AM SURPRISED THAT I WAS A GIGGLING MESS DURING THEIR SEXY TIMES OSJSKSNS THIS IS LIKE 98% FLUFF 2% ANGST DKDNDK i Am in love with this fic ohmygod thank u for writing this

That was cute and the flow of the story was well done, it felt very easy and nice to read.

This is so good!!! I really love your writing style and characterization, and that last line just killed me, ugh got me right in the heart <3 Excellent fic!

OHMYGOD IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL I ALMOST SHED A TEAR? The plot, the whole concept and progress in taekook's relationship is absolutely amazing! I love supportive BTS I love whipped Kookie and I love needy Tae. By now you can probably tell how much I fell for this fic. Also, I adore Non-AU and I'm always too lazy to search for any so I'm very happy I found this one. You didn't disappoint me - quite opposite actually. I feel so soft and warm inside I could probably vomit a rainbow. Thank you for this amazing fic! <3 I enjoyed it a lot!

Omg. I LOVED everything about this fic. There are few occasions when I love a work so much as this one. I loved every moment and it’s wonderfully written and balanced.Thank you!

“your lips were blue”HOLY HELL THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY GOD BYE

gosh gosh i lkved this so much that ending had me clutching my chest ohmyg

I really loved it! I love the way you write and describe everything, what a pleasant reading ❤

INLOVEF THIS SO MUCH!

Omg this was the sweetest thing ever... the ending literally made me fluffy inside ... thank u author nim for writing this amazing fic ♡♡¤

MY DAY HAS BEEN MADE BY THUS FLUFF OH MY GOD THAT WAS JUST ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE ?!?!! :") #iloveditsomuch ❤

i enjoyed reading this so much!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!

aHHHHG MY GOD IM SCREAMING THIS IS TOO ADORABLE SJSHSJSBSISSHSJSJSJSNS THIS IS ONE HELL OF A BRILLIANT AU IM DED IM DEEEEDDDDD YAASSSSSSSSS ODMDHSIS HAHAHAHA

THIS IS AMAZING HOLY SHIT

THAT ENDING THO OK I WANT DEATH

the ending was literally the cutest ending I've ever read?????? thank you????? I love this fic?????

OMG ARE YOU KIDDING WITH ME STOP IT THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER OH MY GOOOD????????????????????????????????????????+<333333333333333333333

i almost cried at the last sentence omg.