*wheeze*... this is a blessing...
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD I CANNOT
HOLD ON THERES GONNA BE A SECOND CHAPTER SLKJDGHSLKDJGHSDKJ Y E S
I adore the writing and you did so so well on the outsider pov. I love how you explore Becket's character as well as the theme of rules throughout the fic. That was a super cool element! It reminds me a bit of a 5:1 fic! I loved that. THis is so creative, thank you for writing!
wonderingredroses
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POV outsider?!!! Yay!!This was hilarious. The small appearances and the roomba. I can’t wait for the next chapter. :)
IM IN TEARS THIS IS EVERYTHING
op,,, op your fics are the equivalent to water in a heat-stricken desert
OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! IDC IF IT'S FRICKING MIDNIGHT I'VE BEEN LAUGHING SO MUCH! You're my favorite author, I'm glad that you have blessed us with this, it's gorgeous.
absolutely LOVE this outside perspective and the amused bewilderment the other interns regard Peter with. Adorable, funny, just such an enjoyable fic to read ahhhh!
beantheredonethat
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This is hilarious!!! Dang I laughed so much reading this, Roomba-kid is also the perfect alias my gosh
Roomba-Kid is a powerful title
"anyways this is incredibly self indulgent outsider pov but also this is ao3 and no one can stop me" is the most valid sentence I've seen on this website in some time. As usual, you do a hilarious and really great job with your indulgent fun. You really captured the cryptid-ness of peter!
This is the specific type of fic I always crave and yet struggle so much to find, so thank you so much for this blessing.All the interns are super likeable, everyone is in character, and the writing itself is super good too! :)
I love this so much❤️❤️❤️
This is the most brilliant thing I've read in months!!! :D Well done!
This was a joy to read, thank you, you made my day
What a great story to wake up to!
This is so sweet, and wonderfully written!! Are you going to continue this? I would love to read more! Thank you for sharing! <3<3<3<3<3<3
I MISS GOOD INTERNSHIP STORIES GHANK YOU KINDLY
I loved this!!!! I like fics where peter is kinda a myth/legend, you depicted this well :)
Oh my god this is soI didn't know I needed this and now I love it so much???
the tALENT JUMPED OUT IM- this was amazing thank you very much
Omg this is glorious!!!!Thank you thank you thank youuuuI can't stop laughing oh my goddd
i lost it at "Becket even swears he’s seen Mr. Stark holding open a door for it, once" and haven't stopped laughing for a second. this is the greatest thing i've ever read. i,,, cannot tell u how brilliant that was. you're a genius, jesus christ, i am in actual awe. thank u for sharing this gem
'Ha. Take that, Mr. Stark. Never underestimate what teenagers will do out of spite.'Ok, I completely lost it at this line.
"And the Academy Award for best use of OCs without a Mary Sue or self insertion in the lot goes to. . . BLUEH!"The crowd goes wild.This reminds me a bit of an episode from Babylon5 in which the entire point of view came from a couple of low level mechanics or janitors. Great job
Outsider POV is soooo good holy shit. This is absolutely the SI internship experience I expect and adore for Peter and Tony. (Maybe now that Peter knows his intern buddies had to clean it up, he won't do any more drastic pranks, lol.) So cute, thanks for this!!!
*slams fist on table*I love this fanfic and I would die for all of them and you.
Leaving a pre-reading-the-fic comment because I wanted to tell you I clicked as soon as I read the words 'roomba kid'. I will probably leave another comment once I have read this.
Oh, My God. I love this and really want to read the next chapter but I want to leave this comment first.I really enjoy outsider POV fics when done well, since they're always SO good, and this is no exception. The unfathomable singing roomba, the unstickable sticky notes, successfully-executed references to Noodle Incidents, the dynamic between Peter and Tony... I will likely be bookmarking this fic once I've read chapter 2 💖ETA: I forgot to mention I love your ocs?? because I do, love your ocs. They're great.
yes yes yes! love this sm!!!
Imaginative_Introvert
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I am obsessed with your writing!
OMgomgomgomgomgomg i lvoe this soooo much! This is a freaking delight! I'm having so much fun reading this!
Black Dragon on the Rocks (animealam)
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I absolutely loved this, and if I could give you more than 1 kudos, believe me, I would.
This is one of the best things I’ve ever read!
Little_Miss_Anime_Luva
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Holy shit I love this so much 💖💖💖💖 🤣🤣🤣🤣 gotta love Roomba-kid
I love all the shenanigans!!! <3 <3 <3
EnergeticEccentricism
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"He’s a tiny demon running around with the power of god at his fingertips." "Number five is that Peter Parker (alias: Roomba-Kid) is an unstoppable force of nature that no one can squash and fears no god nor man on this earth" oh my god these two sentences killed me, they're great. I had to muffle the very loud laughter that wanted to escape me because the rest of my house is asleep. Thank you
I did not know i needed this, but by god i did
I love this - amazing, show stopping, spectacular. Also seeing the word stoichiometry gave me flashbacks so thank you
mysticart2020 (inastras)
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thankk you for feedng my serotonin levels ahshsisdj
Leonix_the_Phoenix
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this was all amazing but oh my god "like a fetish?" i-
This was???? Amazing??? I think I'm in love. Outsider pov with cryptic Peter was all I ever wanted in life.