I really want to see the discussion about flash. Like tony gets all protective. Maybe he turns up to school one day to see flash harrassing Peter. idk, I just really want to see that whole thing. Loved this fic though!!
WingsWithoutStrings
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Loved it and yes, we all need more Rhodey in our lives
Such a fantastic way for Rhodey to see Peter out of suit and find out his age. Really liked his reaction to Peter's age. Peter accidentally spilling the beans about Flash's bulling him was great as well. Any chance of following up about that at all? Also, since you mentioned it, would love to see a fic where Tony had to patch up Peter for the first time.
Yes yes yes yes yes!!!! I needed this so bad. Rhodey is so awesome!
Undercover_Royalty
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Loved everybody's characterizations here- they were so spot on! Also loving the dynamic between Tony and Rhodey and how Peter adds a new element to that mix. This is a great fic all-around, and thanks for sharing it!
guardianofdragonlore
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I was waiting to see this kind of fic. Thank you!
amazing, oh god i loved it
Yes. This fic was on point with its characterizations. I'm so glad I found this fic.
kaleidoscope_phantasmagoria
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"Repeat after me: Mister Stark is a bad, bad man. Your heart is too pure for him. Don’t let him corrupt you.” XD I just about died.
So well written, my god amazing. I can't wait to see what other stories you write. God damn incredible, love it. Sad it's over.
Soooooo in-character. Love it. The only thing lacking is a few more chapters. ;)
Okay but I'm going to need more
where_thewind_blows
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Aww really appreciated this! I love uncle Rhodey!
"'I can feel your judgement! ...Get out!'"Lol, love it
Brilliant! We are all Rhodey.
You do a fantastic job of capturing each of them! This was great!
i'm crying!!!!!!!! wow!!!!! i love everything about this fic so much !!!! i love the characterization of everyone, and how you still somehow managed to keep the whole mood light even though peter had been shot. i've re-read this 4 times already & i don't think i'm going to stop?? it's such an enjoyable read i'm losing my mind thank u!!!!!
Pats_across_the_globe
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oh my god, this was purely amazing!
I had to re-read this because the characterizations all around are simply spot on!
I loved it this was really good (although I would've been really excited to see may turn up)
Of course Peter would do his best to save a busload of people in or out if the suit. I love him and this so much :D
This was adorable! I simply loved everyone's interactions, each character was spot on!
Ahhhhhhh this is beautiful and hilarious and sad and ahhhhhHHAHAHAHAHAHHHH I don't know wether to scream or laugh! Great job and so can't wait for more:D
I'm in love with poor, beleaguered, exasperated Rhodey and dad!Tony, not to mention delirious Peter. Tony really does deserve an ass-kicking for bringing Peter to Germany.
This is cute I love it QvQI 10000% support grumpy uncle rhodey and dad tony these are my new favorite things
Rofl, love the way tony and Rhodes banter. Highly amusing. XD
so much cackling. I really needed this :)
Great work! I love the voice you've given Tony in this.
bonehandledknife (ladywinter)
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toooo cuteeeee
DAMN UR SO GOOD AT DIALOGUEALLOW ME TO COMPILE SOME OF MY FAVORITE BITS"Meekly, like a child who knew he was about to be chewed out by a parent, he asks, “Y-you called Tony?”""“What’s your name?”“Danger,” the kid responds dreamily.“Peter,” Tony supplies at the same time." “I can feel your judgement!” Tony shouts. “Get out!”
WHY ARE YOU SO GREAT AT WRITING TONY AND PETER YOU’RE KIllInG mE
BewitchedByBuddie
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Love it! :)
This made me curious as to what a May/Tony relationship would look like
myglassesaredirty
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This was so well-written and I loved it with every fiber of my being. + I really love Rhodey, so thank you so much for including him!
Tony's protective-worry leading him to ask exactly which teenager in Queens got shot. *coos* I will always love the Irondad. *laughing* Bless Rhodey. Someone needs to needle Tony - out of love, of course. This is adorable, thank you for sharing!I hope you're having a great day!
Looooved this. Great to read a fic from Rhodey's POV for once.
Hahaha Loved this!! Very well written :D
Cute fic. Thanks for writing! :)
This is excellent! I love Rhodey's involvement and Peter thinking they were all in Chuck E Cheese ("he's the rat" really made me laugh)
SAJDASKJDAD TONY'S LAST LINE AT THE END!! I ENJOYED THE READ THIS WAS SOOOOO GOOD THANK Y OU FOR WRITING AND SHARING IT!!
I really love this one. The dialogue is great!
I loved the characterization in this!
lover_of_blue_roses
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'What's your name?' 'Danger.' Best line XD
I've probably read this 4 times now and tomorrow I'm probably gonna make it 5, this is soooooo good, love the characterization, super cute, keep up the good work my love!!
Loved Rhodey's pov and his interactions with Tony.